for Desperately6/22/2004 c1 
14icemint
Oh wow...that was great~! And in first person, too. I usually have a harder time writing from that point of view. You did a really good job of it! =)
14icemintOh wow...that was great~! And in first person, too. I usually have a harder time writing from that point of view. You did a really good job of it! =)
2/9/2004 c1 31Wolfychann
"he cracked his soul open and licked the husk dry"
Wow.
This is... intense. It's damn good writing, and you know it.
I gotta especially comend you for one specific thing: you never type out "Seth and I are the same person," or anything so heavy handed. You just let the reader gradually understand. Very nicely done.
31Wolfychann"he cracked his soul open and licked the husk dry"
Wow.
This is... intense. It's damn good writing, and you know it.
I gotta especially comend you for one specific thing: you never type out "Seth and I are the same person," or anything so heavy handed. You just let the reader gradually understand. Very nicely done.
12/23/2002 c1 Yama Strife
this was good. and i think i completely understood it. damn seth! damn him! ACK!
this was good. and i think i completely understood it. damn seth! damn him! ACK!
11/11/2002 c1 7ziggy pop eno
this is so excellent. i love your work-write more stuff more often!
thought I'd let you know that 'Fairy Boys' has been updated-but I moved it from the romance section to the original-general fiction section. so you can find it there :]
7ziggy pop enothis is so excellent. i love your work-write more stuff more often!
thought I'd let you know that 'Fairy Boys' has been updated-but I moved it from the romance section to the original-general fiction section. so you can find it there :]
10/27/2002 c1 6TBLite
Your good. I must admit. In fact, after I read Any More Gray I had an urge to ask you, (and now i will) if you would mind if i posted you stories on my website when i get finished making it. (ITs not up yet of coarse). I would really appreciate if i could link to them or sumthin.
Cypress
6TBLiteYour good. I must admit. In fact, after I read Any More Gray I had an urge to ask you, (and now i will) if you would mind if i posted you stories on my website when i get finished making it. (ITs not up yet of coarse). I would really appreciate if i could link to them or sumthin.
Cypress
10/9/2002 c1 35Angelic Hooligan
Holy shit.
I've only 'said' that for one other person. You should be honored. Well, not really.
Aftertaste of a Razorblade (it's a pain in the ass to type her name) was right. She recommended your stories to me, and I have to say she has good taste. Please continue.
35Angelic HooliganHoly shit.
I've only 'said' that for one other person. You should be honored. Well, not really.
Aftertaste of a Razorblade (it's a pain in the ass to type her name) was right. She recommended your stories to me, and I have to say she has good taste. Please continue.
10/7/2002 c1 Bitter Berry
That totally rocked! It was great ^_^ I like this Seth...thing/man/person. *lol* I like very much. ^^; Woo.
That totally rocked! It was great ^_^ I like this Seth...thing/man/person. *lol* I like very much. ^^; Woo.
9/17/2002 c1 32Mackenzie Anderson
Twisted. I usually prefer f/f over m/m but I'm glad I gave this a chance... very well written.
32Mackenzie AndersonTwisted. I usually prefer f/f over m/m but I'm glad I gave this a chance... very well written.
9/15/2002 c1 2Scratch1
...Oh Damn. This story kicks ass! I'm surprized it dosnt have more reviews. But i have a question. Is seth like, a figment of his imagination, or is that for us to figure out ourselfs?
Great story,
-Mai
2Scratch1...Oh Damn. This story kicks ass! I'm surprized it dosnt have more reviews. But i have a question. Is seth like, a figment of his imagination, or is that for us to figure out ourselfs?
Great story,
-Mai
9/14/2002 c1 trustAnti
*twitches about in FF's new layout*
One of those stories you read and half of your brain is screaming "AH! Bad things!" and the other half is going "Ooo.. more."
I'll only forgive Seth because you gave him a nice name. And gracias for clarifying the non-one-person-ness of it.
*twitches about in FF's new layout*
One of those stories you read and half of your brain is screaming "AH! Bad things!" and the other half is going "Ooo.. more."
I'll only forgive Seth because you gave him a nice name. And gracias for clarifying the non-one-person-ness of it.
9/14/2002 c1 98ShadowGal
I liked this, although I must admit I am slightly confused... :::looks embarrassed::: Does this guy have a split personality, or is Seth really a separate person? Well, this was a very good story one way or the other, confusion or no.
One more question: the last line reads 'And god, it's good to wake up in someone's arms and know you haven't him.' Is there a word missing there?
98ShadowGalI liked this, although I must admit I am slightly confused... :::looks embarrassed::: Does this guy have a split personality, or is Seth really a separate person? Well, this was a very good story one way or the other, confusion or no.
One more question: the last line reads 'And god, it's good to wake up in someone's arms and know you haven't him.' Is there a word missing there?