for Colour Me In5/14/2003 c22 LazyDaze06
i'm guessing michelle goes bye-bye, while kevin & adam hook ^ as well as august & evo. can't wait 4 the next chap. hopefully longer than this 1.
i'm guessing michelle goes bye-bye, while kevin & adam hook ^ as well as august & evo. can't wait 4 the next chap. hopefully longer than this 1.
4/30/2003 c21 
2crissy
you think august would be willing to join my political activist group against unnecessary phone calling? We're against tele-marketers, teeny boppers, siblings' friends, relatives we don't know, people who make you talk to their pets, and other people who are generally unpleasant to converse with over the phone. We're still a small organization but we're going everyday and we hope to have a bill ready to be sent to the senate by 2004 outlining the new phone policy we would like to instate.
2crissyyou think august would be willing to join my political activist group against unnecessary phone calling? We're against tele-marketers, teeny boppers, siblings' friends, relatives we don't know, people who make you talk to their pets, and other people who are generally unpleasant to converse with over the phone. We're still a small organization but we're going everyday and we hope to have a bill ready to be sent to the senate by 2004 outlining the new phone policy we would like to instate.
4/15/2003 c21 how do you delete accounts
God, the phone never DOES shut up, does it? I hate it. It needs to die. It's pointless, especially when you're usually talking to the same people online at the same time anyway. Although you're wrong. You CAN zone out when you're on the phone. Act all disinterested. I do it all the time. Then the person thinks I died or something, but hey, it's worth the effort when they start thinking they've been talking to nobody for the last five minutes. Anyway. good chappie.
God, the phone never DOES shut up, does it? I hate it. It needs to die. It's pointless, especially when you're usually talking to the same people online at the same time anyway. Although you're wrong. You CAN zone out when you're on the phone. Act all disinterested. I do it all the time. Then the person thinks I died or something, but hey, it's worth the effort when they start thinking they've been talking to nobody for the last five minutes. Anyway. good chappie.
4/12/2003 c21 Michelle
im getting so excited about this fic! i like whats happenening lol keep writing and update!
im getting so excited about this fic! i like whats happenening lol keep writing and update!
4/9/2003 c20 Michelle
i hope she doesnt wnd up with evo cuz he's weird n stuff but hes uhh...dumb sorta lol
keep writing!
i hope she doesnt wnd up with evo cuz he's weird n stuff but hes uhh...dumb sorta lol
keep writing!
4/7/2003 c21 23IAmVulcanLady
LOL! I found the whole phopne chapter funny! I'm like that with teh phone...I never call anyone, and people rarely call me. Odd, considering my sister is permanetley attched to her cell phone, but whatever.
I liked this chapter, and I can't wait for more! Will Livi find out that Adam is gay soon? And can I smakc some sense into her PLEASE? She is being stupid... LOL
BYE
=Vulcan=
Can't wait for more
23IAmVulcanLadyLOL! I found the whole phopne chapter funny! I'm like that with teh phone...I never call anyone, and people rarely call me. Odd, considering my sister is permanetley attched to her cell phone, but whatever.
I liked this chapter, and I can't wait for more! Will Livi find out that Adam is gay soon? And can I smakc some sense into her PLEASE? She is being stupid... LOL
BYE
=Vulcan=
Can't wait for more
4/7/2003 c21 Lisey
sorry i didn't review the last chapter... been very busy with all my stuff and didn't realise you'd updated..
i like back to the future 1 and 3, but i don't like 2 that much... although if you're doing things properly, you have to watch all three...
*grins* don't you just hate when you're trying to do something and everyone phones? that once happened while i was trying to make a lamp from two broken ones and annoyed the hell out of me...
anyway, as ever, it's brilliant and funny and i'm jealous of your writing abilities :)
So, i really have no clue what's going to happen next...
although, i think it would make my day if they really did drug and kidnap Livi...
Love and hugs,
Lisa.
sorry i didn't review the last chapter... been very busy with all my stuff and didn't realise you'd updated..
i like back to the future 1 and 3, but i don't like 2 that much... although if you're doing things properly, you have to watch all three...
*grins* don't you just hate when you're trying to do something and everyone phones? that once happened while i was trying to make a lamp from two broken ones and annoyed the hell out of me...
anyway, as ever, it's brilliant and funny and i'm jealous of your writing abilities :)
So, i really have no clue what's going to happen next...
although, i think it would make my day if they really did drug and kidnap Livi...
Love and hugs,
Lisa.
4/6/2003 c21 Yodes
Jeff Buckley? Jeff Buckley? *pokes with a cattleprod* Moving on, good chapter dude:) Little on the short side but still cool an all. Oh well, gotta go write some more rubbish I like to call my own personal attempt at writing. Update soon!
Oh, and dude? *raises eyebrows* orange trousers? *shakes head and wanders off*
Jeff Buckley? Jeff Buckley? *pokes with a cattleprod* Moving on, good chapter dude:) Little on the short side but still cool an all. Oh well, gotta go write some more rubbish I like to call my own personal attempt at writing. Update soon!
Oh, and dude? *raises eyebrows* orange trousers? *shakes head and wanders off*
4/2/2003 c20 IAmVulcanLady
Student protest! YAY! Yehe! Well, with all the protests going on around where I live, it would probably go unnoticed...San Fran is overrun with hippies and grandmas tryng to get the soldiers home, protesting teh war...stuff like that...of course, nothing against them, and there are a lot of other people too...like my teacher...werid.
Great chapter! I loved it when Livi was talking about marriage...she'd get amrried and be divoriced three months later. She stuck in perfect world, while the outside world, only a few feet away from her, is not perfect at all...and not perfect enough for her perfect little head...I'm sorry, but people like Livi seriously bug me, big time.
I really want to know what August was going to tell Livi, or maybe it is seriously obvious and I am 1) reading to fast, or b) being oblivious as always. If it's in there, it's most likely b. LOL
Anways, I can't wait for more!
=Vulcan=
Student protest! YAY! Yehe! Well, with all the protests going on around where I live, it would probably go unnoticed...San Fran is overrun with hippies and grandmas tryng to get the soldiers home, protesting teh war...stuff like that...of course, nothing against them, and there are a lot of other people too...like my teacher...werid.
Great chapter! I loved it when Livi was talking about marriage...she'd get amrried and be divoriced three months later. She stuck in perfect world, while the outside world, only a few feet away from her, is not perfect at all...and not perfect enough for her perfect little head...I'm sorry, but people like Livi seriously bug me, big time.
I really want to know what August was going to tell Livi, or maybe it is seriously obvious and I am 1) reading to fast, or b) being oblivious as always. If it's in there, it's most likely b. LOL
Anways, I can't wait for more!
=Vulcan=
4/1/2003 c20 how do you delete accounts
heeheeheehee..good chappie. Sorry i didn't review ch. 19... but i g2g. good job; update soon!
heeheeheehee..good chappie. Sorry i didn't review ch. 19... but i g2g. good job; update soon!
4/1/2003 c20 Ren
I still love it, but I'm still hanging out here for some Kev & August stuff! He's cute and they flirt heaps! Evo.. hm..? my vote is for Kev & August!
I still love it, but I'm still hanging out here for some Kev & August stuff! He's cute and they flirt heaps! Evo.. hm..? my vote is for Kev & August!
3/31/2003 c20 Yodes
lol. Once again, a funny chapter. ^^ And now Evo resembles an elf in some way. Strange.
Anyway, dude, you HAVE seen him in weeks. Wasn't it like, 2 weeks ago? *shrugs* Was Arse Man the one from the telly, or was it the one that used to do League Of Gentleman impressions at the top of his lungs in public places? Okay, what's the difference between nice looking and sexy?
You better update soon dude!
lol. Once again, a funny chapter. ^^ And now Evo resembles an elf in some way. Strange.
Anyway, dude, you HAVE seen him in weeks. Wasn't it like, 2 weeks ago? *shrugs* Was Arse Man the one from the telly, or was it the one that used to do League Of Gentleman impressions at the top of his lungs in public places? Okay, what's the difference between nice looking and sexy?
You better update soon dude!
3/26/2003 c19 4ali was already taken
this very well may be the best story ever written.
wanna update?
*grovel*grovel*
c'mon, you know you cant resist my superior groveling skills!
...please?
insanely yours,
ali
*on a bike ride to the moon*
4ali was already takenthis very well may be the best story ever written.
wanna update?
*grovel*grovel*
c'mon, you know you cant resist my superior groveling skills!
...please?
insanely yours,
ali
*on a bike ride to the moon*
3/24/2003 c19 23IAmVulcanLady
No problemo with the updates. I know all of us get busy...hell, I don't get home until 8:30 some nights...
I liked the Maine is "a) cold, b) very grey, c) very much lacking in scenery of any kind and d) did I mention cold?" LOL
And no, the running into a tree thing was not cruel :)
Well, I have homework, bai, and update soon because it's an awesome story and I can't wait for more!
=Vulcan=
Does Livi have a breakdown when she finds out Adam is gay? (LMFAO) I find it funny that she doesn't notice...
23IAmVulcanLadyNo problemo with the updates. I know all of us get busy...hell, I don't get home until 8:30 some nights...
I liked the Maine is "a) cold, b) very grey, c) very much lacking in scenery of any kind and d) did I mention cold?" LOL
And no, the running into a tree thing was not cruel :)
Well, I have homework, bai, and update soon because it's an awesome story and I can't wait for more!
=Vulcan=
Does Livi have a breakdown when she finds out Adam is gay? (LMFAO) I find it funny that she doesn't notice...
3/23/2003 c19 socogrl
Awesome story. You have great characters and a cool style of writing. I look forward to reading more of your stuff!
Awesome story. You have great characters and a cool style of writing. I look forward to reading more of your stuff!