for Colour Me In11/14/2003 c35 carrotress
spiffy! do love that word... but im glad evo will be back..,. good chapter
spiffy! do love that word... but im glad evo will be back..,. good chapter
11/12/2003 c35 
10Ferretti
So does the ending... What happens next? Don't take so long this time.. of course having to get your hard drive wiped is a good excuse... And of course the older brother picks up on the looks someone else is too clueless to see :P
10FerrettiSo does the ending... What happens next? Don't take so long this time.. of course having to get your hard drive wiped is a good excuse... And of course the older brother picks up on the looks someone else is too clueless to see :P
11/11/2003 c35 beni
NO! Don't end THERE!
NO! Don't end THERE!
11/10/2003 c35 Michelle
o cliffhanger ending! thats evil but i guess its better than having a simple happy ending.YAY! im a sucker for happy stories and depressing stories,but dont make this all depressing and stuff. the wallowing reminded me of gilmore girls( dont know if you get that show in england), cute (in a good way).
it was dredful to check every monday for an update but now everything is wonderful!you really scred me at the begining with the wallowing cause i really was thinking he was going to be gay, but then i thought that theres only 10% of men that are gay and what are the chances of august having 2 gay friends?
i noticed jeffrey eugenides is one of your fav authors. did you read the vigin suicides? cause that is one beautifully depressing story.
update soon!
o cliffhanger ending! thats evil but i guess its better than having a simple happy ending.YAY! im a sucker for happy stories and depressing stories,but dont make this all depressing and stuff. the wallowing reminded me of gilmore girls( dont know if you get that show in england), cute (in a good way).
it was dredful to check every monday for an update but now everything is wonderful!you really scred me at the begining with the wallowing cause i really was thinking he was going to be gay, but then i thought that theres only 10% of men that are gay and what are the chances of august having 2 gay friends?
i noticed jeffrey eugenides is one of your fav authors. did you read the vigin suicides? cause that is one beautifully depressing story.
update soon!
11/10/2003 c35 AlienVision
it took u so long to get this chapter up...i forgot half the plot of this story, and i had to do a flashback kinda thingi to realize the plot of this fic...hope u update sooner this time...cause this story is great...yeah, one of my superpowers is to haunt computers, and their owners...computers deserve ur full respect, so rite now, take ur time to now down beofre ur computer, and do a few heartful prayers, that i dont haunt u...update soon!
it took u so long to get this chapter up...i forgot half the plot of this story, and i had to do a flashback kinda thingi to realize the plot of this fic...hope u update sooner this time...cause this story is great...yeah, one of my superpowers is to haunt computers, and their owners...computers deserve ur full respect, so rite now, take ur time to now down beofre ur computer, and do a few heartful prayers, that i dont haunt u...update soon!
11/10/2003 c35 23IAmVulcanLady
YAY! New chapter!
O! But you can't have something on between Kev and August! I really think Evo and August should be together! But everwhat, I think she should just get with one of them. Either way it'll be awesome:)
And awesome twist! I would have never guessed Adam and Kev's older brother! That was really good!
Have an awesome time at school :)
=Vulcan=
23IAmVulcanLadyYAY! New chapter!
O! But you can't have something on between Kev and August! I really think Evo and August should be together! But everwhat, I think she should just get with one of them. Either way it'll be awesome:)
And awesome twist! I would have never guessed Adam and Kev's older brother! That was really good!
Have an awesome time at school :)
=Vulcan=
11/10/2003 c35 Yodes
*faints* You updated! *faints again*
That was a good chapter dude, but far too short seeing as I had to wait so long for it! *pokes* make it longer next time!
Ahem, okay, so, I liked it. You have the annoying big brother, the funny thoughts, the funny coming out speech and the chocolate thing. *nods* yep, it's all good. Update soon.
Now, where did I put MY chocolate? *wanders off*
*faints* You updated! *faints again*
That was a good chapter dude, but far too short seeing as I had to wait so long for it! *pokes* make it longer next time!
Ahem, okay, so, I liked it. You have the annoying big brother, the funny thoughts, the funny coming out speech and the chocolate thing. *nods* yep, it's all good. Update soon.
Now, where did I put MY chocolate? *wanders off*
11/10/2003 c35 2crissy
there was no hints about lewis! what is going on here? how can i be omniscient if i don't even have a clue?
2crissythere was no hints about lewis! what is going on here? how can i be omniscient if i don't even have a clue?
11/10/2003 c10 6Secretive
He has a GIRLFRIEND? That just came out of nowhere! Stupid man! I might be conmpletey wrong here-since I don't know a thing about it-but I thought he was flirting with her. Does he mean girlfriend, like a friend that is a girl? Okay, probably not, just wishing. And while we are at it, what is the matter with Adam? Is his dad trying to force him to be something that he is not? Did his mom die? Or are they getting a divorce? What is the matter with the poor guy? Okay, okay, I think I'll just continue reading and figure out from there. ^.^ Great story!
6SecretiveHe has a GIRLFRIEND? That just came out of nowhere! Stupid man! I might be conmpletey wrong here-since I don't know a thing about it-but I thought he was flirting with her. Does he mean girlfriend, like a friend that is a girl? Okay, probably not, just wishing. And while we are at it, what is the matter with Adam? Is his dad trying to force him to be something that he is not? Did his mom die? Or are they getting a divorce? What is the matter with the poor guy? Okay, okay, I think I'll just continue reading and figure out from there. ^.^ Great story!
11/10/2003 c9 Secretive
Darn you! It's always so freaking confusing when I like the two main guy characters in a story. I try to be all 'pro Kev' and then you turn Adam into this whole mysterious shy guy. Grr... ^.^ I am really getting into this story, if you can't tell. And now I'm kind of confused about which guy I want to...um...win. Man, that was a weird thing to write, seeing as it's not some 'male competition' thing. But hey, they have so much testosterone that it could turn into one at any given moment. o.O Okay, this review is turning into something completely on the strange side. But anyways, I really like this story, and besides the whole confusion on what guy is better, I love it! ^.^ In fact, I love it since I can't choose a guy! They are both so sweet! Unto the next chappie!
Darn you! It's always so freaking confusing when I like the two main guy characters in a story. I try to be all 'pro Kev' and then you turn Adam into this whole mysterious shy guy. Grr... ^.^ I am really getting into this story, if you can't tell. And now I'm kind of confused about which guy I want to...um...win. Man, that was a weird thing to write, seeing as it's not some 'male competition' thing. But hey, they have so much testosterone that it could turn into one at any given moment. o.O Okay, this review is turning into something completely on the strange side. But anyways, I really like this story, and besides the whole confusion on what guy is better, I love it! ^.^ In fact, I love it since I can't choose a guy! They are both so sweet! Unto the next chappie!
11/10/2003 c6 Secretive
Oh, it's simply that Adam is not right for her. He's a sweet guy-abeit boring, but sweet. ^.^ I really like this story so far! And I can't wait until there is more of Keven! ...Or Adam, either way you're going here. I just really like the nice, lost guy. They seriously don't come like that anymore! ^.^ This is a really great story!
Oh, it's simply that Adam is not right for her. He's a sweet guy-abeit boring, but sweet. ^.^ I really like this story so far! And I can't wait until there is more of Keven! ...Or Adam, either way you're going here. I just really like the nice, lost guy. They seriously don't come like that anymore! ^.^ This is a really great story!
11/10/2003 c4 Secretive
I know exactly how August feels, I live in one of those little towns that you can never get out of. You're born here, you die here, and if you're an idiot, you move here. Heck, we have our own college for the town. Anyways, I really like your story, and August seems cool. Her friends are somewhat annoying, and her mom seriously needs to get off her case! I like Keven, but what's wrong with Adam?
I know exactly how August feels, I live in one of those little towns that you can never get out of. You're born here, you die here, and if you're an idiot, you move here. Heck, we have our own college for the town. Anyways, I really like your story, and August seems cool. Her friends are somewhat annoying, and her mom seriously needs to get off her case! I like Keven, but what's wrong with Adam?
11/4/2003 c34 Ren
Hey! I've finally found this story again. It's been ages since I've read an update. But of course I still love it! i so can't wait to read the next chapter! please? It's great! i love it! i love Kev, he's so cute!
Hey! I've finally found this story again. It's been ages since I've read an update. But of course I still love it! i so can't wait to read the next chapter! please? It's great! i love it! i love Kev, he's so cute!
10/12/2003 c34 AlienVision
hello...u offially have a new reader/reviewer... and u haven't updated in how long? please update soon... i can tell what's gonna happen though... adam/keven...rite? well, that's what i think... u gotta update soon... like rite now... u HAVE too, or i'll haunt u... u see, i m secretly a spirit living in a computer... and i have really cool superspirit powers... i should really stop doing "..." now... update soon!
hello...u offially have a new reader/reviewer... and u haven't updated in how long? please update soon... i can tell what's gonna happen though... adam/keven...rite? well, that's what i think... u gotta update soon... like rite now... u HAVE too, or i'll haunt u... u see, i m secretly a spirit living in a computer... and i have really cool superspirit powers... i should really stop doing "..." now... update soon!
9/25/2003 c34 how do you delete accounts
URGURGURGURGURG!
HOW IS KEV GAY?
Send chapter 35 to me? Please?
URGURGURGURGURG!
HOW IS KEV GAY?
Send chapter 35 to me? Please?