3/21/2003 c13 Luke-sama
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that was so funny! I love this story so much! Love it love it love itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove it! ops... forgot a space in there... ^-^;;
Anyway, this was really great and you need to update to keep us all laughing!
-Luke
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that was so funny! I love this story so much! Love it love it love itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove itlove it! ops... forgot a space in there... ^-^;;
Anyway, this was really great and you need to update to keep us all laughing!
-Luke
3/20/2003 c13 Glass Malibu
*begins to go into typical Beth fangirl swoon, but stops and twitches*
You know about Tallulah?
*considers this*
Hmm...you know about Tallulah, my frightenering alter ego...oh well.
AWESOMES CHAPTER, KEEBS! (Am I the only one who calls you Keebs? I might be. Who knows. Is that where you got Eirs? Neat!)
FINALLY FINALLY UPDATED! I love...cake. Oh, and Keebs.
Anyway, eagerly awaiting more. I thoroughly enjoyed being reunited with Kyani. Yes.
Keep writing, Keebs, and I'll keep displaying fine redheaded bishies for you.
~Beth!
*begins to go into typical Beth fangirl swoon, but stops and twitches*
You know about Tallulah?
*considers this*
Hmm...you know about Tallulah, my frightenering alter ego...oh well.
AWESOMES CHAPTER, KEEBS! (Am I the only one who calls you Keebs? I might be. Who knows. Is that where you got Eirs? Neat!)
FINALLY FINALLY UPDATED! I love...cake. Oh, and Keebs.
Anyway, eagerly awaiting more. I thoroughly enjoyed being reunited with Kyani. Yes.
Keep writing, Keebs, and I'll keep displaying fine redheaded bishies for you.
~Beth!
3/19/2003 c13 1Mikael Angelique
Hey!
This story, as always, gave me a good, hard laugh. I just love it! You have such a strange, yet unique sense of humor, and you really make the story come alive by incorperating it into it!
Your voice as the narrator/author is alot different in this as in "Legends" or "Anoigma" (I did NOT spell that right), but it's still good. See, if you wrote this in the epic tone like Luke's stuff, or like you did in "Legends", it wouldn't be half as funny, or even half as good. Some stories just NEED that sophisticated and well-written style with the hilarious commentary by the narrator/author and the little psycho tendencies that we all get... ^^
I loved it! All your work is so good! I can't believe that more people haven't read and reviewed your stuff! That just isn't right... ;_;
Well, anyway, that was extremely good, and I'm looking foreward to the next chapter!
Good going as always!
Sincerely,
~Mikael Angelique 0;)
(by the way, I haven't put up anything of my own... yet!)
Hey!
This story, as always, gave me a good, hard laugh. I just love it! You have such a strange, yet unique sense of humor, and you really make the story come alive by incorperating it into it!
Your voice as the narrator/author is alot different in this as in "Legends" or "Anoigma" (I did NOT spell that right), but it's still good. See, if you wrote this in the epic tone like Luke's stuff, or like you did in "Legends", it wouldn't be half as funny, or even half as good. Some stories just NEED that sophisticated and well-written style with the hilarious commentary by the narrator/author and the little psycho tendencies that we all get... ^^
I loved it! All your work is so good! I can't believe that more people haven't read and reviewed your stuff! That just isn't right... ;_;
Well, anyway, that was extremely good, and I'm looking foreward to the next chapter!
Good going as always!
Sincerely,
~Mikael Angelique 0;)
(by the way, I haven't put up anything of my own... yet!)
1/25/2003 c12 4Kyani Star
I LOVE MY CHARACTER! MELLO POWER FOREVER!
Lange is amusing when he's drunk...I think I like him more when he's drunk. *Prepares vat of hot toddys*
I can't wait to see what happens when everyone meets up...and what new parts the almighty mello has, of course!
Kyani
I LOVE MY CHARACTER! MELLO POWER FOREVER!
Lange is amusing when he's drunk...I think I like him more when he's drunk. *Prepares vat of hot toddys*
I can't wait to see what happens when everyone meets up...and what new parts the almighty mello has, of course!
Kyani
1/25/2003 c11 Kyani Star
This is great stuff! *smiles like an idiot and spins around in the middle of the room*
This chapter is like...like readable caffiene or something! Now I feel all happer! Keep it coming!
Kyani (undisputed owner of the elves and don't you dare say otherwise Eirian!)
This is great stuff! *smiles like an idiot and spins around in the middle of the room*
This chapter is like...like readable caffiene or something! Now I feel all happer! Keep it coming!
Kyani (undisputed owner of the elves and don't you dare say otherwise Eirian!)
1/25/2003 c10 Kyani Star
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while...I just transferred back to my old high school and I actually have to DO STUFF to keep up in my classes!
I love this chapter...but my favorite part is by far when Beth is sobbing and drinking the snapple! That's just as grand as it gets!
OH and of course...GO K-CHAN! ^_^
Kyani
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a while...I just transferred back to my old high school and I actually have to DO STUFF to keep up in my classes!
I love this chapter...but my favorite part is by far when Beth is sobbing and drinking the snapple! That's just as grand as it gets!
OH and of course...GO K-CHAN! ^_^
Kyani
1/24/2003 c12 1Yukiko-sama
OMG! I didn't know you'd put me in there! thanks Taka! ^-^ I feel so lofed! lol. This story is very funny! I love it!
Rock. ^-~
OMG! I didn't know you'd put me in there! thanks Taka! ^-^ I feel so lofed! lol. This story is very funny! I love it!
Rock. ^-~
1/19/2003 c12 Glass Malibu
Holy BUTTFLAPS that was a good chapter!
Oooh...drunken Laaaange...(hee hee heeeee...)
It's...The Return of the Plot. Oh yes. That WAS a reference to LoTR, if you didn't catch it, which you probably did. You ARE the Keebs, after all! ^_^
Did I mention lately how much I love my character? Well, yeah, I love her, sure...but I love DANTE better! (I love him better...is that possible? Maybe. They just said "Stampede" on the television. Oh look, I'm getting off topic!)
Hey Keebs, sorry for not reviewing in a while, my DSL is a great big spoot. YES, A SPOOT.
Okay, on to fun things, none so fun as reading this! Whaaaaa! Ja!
~Bethi-sama
Holy BUTTFLAPS that was a good chapter!
Oooh...drunken Laaaange...(hee hee heeeee...)
It's...The Return of the Plot. Oh yes. That WAS a reference to LoTR, if you didn't catch it, which you probably did. You ARE the Keebs, after all! ^_^
Did I mention lately how much I love my character? Well, yeah, I love her, sure...but I love DANTE better! (I love him better...is that possible? Maybe. They just said "Stampede" on the television. Oh look, I'm getting off topic!)
Hey Keebs, sorry for not reviewing in a while, my DSL is a great big spoot. YES, A SPOOT.
Okay, on to fun things, none so fun as reading this! Whaaaaa! Ja!
~Bethi-sama
1/19/2003 c11 Glass Malibu
(eyes fill with tears of pure and COMPLETELY un-subtle joyness)
Mehbuh...whoooom...wa wa wa...
~*Ahem*~
SCREW YOU, NURIKO AND LUPIN, KEEBS IS MY BEST FRIEND!
You're the best, Keebs. The glomping scene made me smile THIS much (waves arms around), and so did the stabbing. Why the stabbing? I don't know! I guess it's sort of an ESPN thing, y'know? Somehow we both realized that we're so much alike that we'd end up fighting over who's better at being us, y'know?
(Feels like Chichiri-san)
Anyway, yeah, I noticed that too, because in this new fic I'm writing, Kiya (you!) and Beth (me, of course!) have a fight over who gets first glomps on Ren, meh sexy black-haireded bish! NYARM! (glomps onto him and refuses to let go, breaking several of his bones in the process)
Ren: GEROFF ME, YOU PSYCHO!
Nooooo! Never! (chews on his ear) Anyway, this chapter really made me smile. Keebs is soooo great, and too many great things in here to choose a favorite! WHO STABS SOMEONE IN THE KNEE? Ha ha ho ho, that made my day...night...whatever. Hey, gonna go read the next chapter!
~Bethi-sama
(eyes fill with tears of pure and COMPLETELY un-subtle joyness)
Mehbuh...whoooom...wa wa wa...
~*Ahem*~
SCREW YOU, NURIKO AND LUPIN, KEEBS IS MY BEST FRIEND!
You're the best, Keebs. The glomping scene made me smile THIS much (waves arms around), and so did the stabbing. Why the stabbing? I don't know! I guess it's sort of an ESPN thing, y'know? Somehow we both realized that we're so much alike that we'd end up fighting over who's better at being us, y'know?
(Feels like Chichiri-san)
Anyway, yeah, I noticed that too, because in this new fic I'm writing, Kiya (you!) and Beth (me, of course!) have a fight over who gets first glomps on Ren, meh sexy black-haireded bish! NYARM! (glomps onto him and refuses to let go, breaking several of his bones in the process)
Ren: GEROFF ME, YOU PSYCHO!
Nooooo! Never! (chews on his ear) Anyway, this chapter really made me smile. Keebs is soooo great, and too many great things in here to choose a favorite! WHO STABS SOMEONE IN THE KNEE? Ha ha ho ho, that made my day...night...whatever. Hey, gonna go read the next chapter!
~Bethi-sama
1/19/2003 c11 15Apple Kinder
Wicked crispy!" i like that!
Nobody's gonna tell ME what to do! HAHAHAHAHAHA! thankie swankie for making me a lot cooler than I am in real life, hahaha... great job, but, maybe im stoopey or something, but I kept getting lost in the dialogue cuz you didnt tell who was talkign a lot ofthe time, can you do that in next chappie, please for all the stoopeys like me? Lova ya doll!
Wicked crispy!" i like that!
Nobody's gonna tell ME what to do! HAHAHAHAHAHA! thankie swankie for making me a lot cooler than I am in real life, hahaha... great job, but, maybe im stoopey or something, but I kept getting lost in the dialogue cuz you didnt tell who was talkign a lot ofthe time, can you do that in next chappie, please for all the stoopeys like me? Lova ya doll!
1/11/2003 c11 8Cinnabar Scarlett
BWAAHAHHAHAAA~~! This is the holy goddess, Marissa Conners! (3rd representative for Earth on the galactic council, from New Jersy in AMERICA!). I got to this before Luke did! WAHAHAHAA~! And, Keebs, I have to say that I am the Glop Queen. DON'T TAKE MY TITLE AWAY FROM ME!
But anyway, this chapter was HILARIOUS, and they were all arguing and bitching right in the middle of the battle, and that was SOOO funny! Pooor Mickey! Is he gonna be alright? You can't kill off angelic bishies any more than you can kill off elf bishies!
WRITE MORE, AND DOOM SHALT NOT FALL UPON THOU!
-Marissa Conners
BWAAHAHHAHAAA~~! This is the holy goddess, Marissa Conners! (3rd representative for Earth on the galactic council, from New Jersy in AMERICA!). I got to this before Luke did! WAHAHAHAA~! And, Keebs, I have to say that I am the Glop Queen. DON'T TAKE MY TITLE AWAY FROM ME!
But anyway, this chapter was HILARIOUS, and they were all arguing and bitching right in the middle of the battle, and that was SOOO funny! Pooor Mickey! Is he gonna be alright? You can't kill off angelic bishies any more than you can kill off elf bishies!
WRITE MORE, AND DOOM SHALT NOT FALL UPON THOU!
-Marissa Conners
1/9/2003 c10 Cinnabar Scarlett I can ALMOST long in now but it won't let me do signed reviews
Wow! That chapter seemed really strange, and it was all skipping around to bunches of people, but it made SENSE, and there were REASONS for it to skip around, and the people in the tavern were REALLY funny! ^_^ That was a long sentance. Anyway, good AS USUAL! You'd better upload the next one, or, again, doom shal fall upon thou! I need to brush up on my shakespeareaeaeaean tone, don't I? .
Wow! That chapter seemed really strange, and it was all skipping around to bunches of people, but it made SENSE, and there were REASONS for it to skip around, and the people in the tavern were REALLY funny! ^_^ That was a long sentance. Anyway, good AS USUAL! You'd better upload the next one, or, again, doom shal fall upon thou! I need to brush up on my shakespeareaeaeaean tone, don't I? .
1/8/2003 c10 Glass Malibu
(rolls around on the floor, laughing hysterically with floods of tears pouring out of her eyes a la Usagi)
HOOOOHOHOHOHOHO! BWAAAHAHAHAHAAAA! (cough cough cough)
BLLLLEEEEEEERRRRRGGGGGHHHH
(calms down for a few minutes)
Whew...
...
...
! (glomps onto Keebs) !
(noogies Keebs) You are my friendly friend! Great chapter! I like the dialogue. And me. How do you capture my essence? (checks pockets for essence) WHERE'S MY ESSENCE? (growls and bites Keebs' ankle) WHERE'S MY ESSENCE? YOU STOLE IT!
(rolls around laughing some more)
Oh, by the way. I read the last chapter at Kyani's house. It was me and Kyani and Dru all there, and we were having a sleepover and we all read chapter 9. It was entertaining. Heeey, but they wouldn't let me review. Dru punched me out of the chair and I had to sit on the desk. But I read it, and it was grrrrrreat! (pays Frosted Flakes some royalties) Hoo hoo hoo...I can't wait for more. I love my character. So cheerful and melodramatic. Too hoo, tee hee.
Bethi-sama! ^_~
(rolls around on the floor, laughing hysterically with floods of tears pouring out of her eyes a la Usagi)
HOOOOHOHOHOHOHO! BWAAAHAHAHAHAAAA! (cough cough cough)
BLLLLEEEEEEERRRRRGGGGGHHHH
(calms down for a few minutes)
Whew...
...
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! (glomps onto Keebs) !
(noogies Keebs) You are my friendly friend! Great chapter! I like the dialogue. And me. How do you capture my essence? (checks pockets for essence) WHERE'S MY ESSENCE? (growls and bites Keebs' ankle) WHERE'S MY ESSENCE? YOU STOLE IT!
(rolls around laughing some more)
Oh, by the way. I read the last chapter at Kyani's house. It was me and Kyani and Dru all there, and we were having a sleepover and we all read chapter 9. It was entertaining. Heeey, but they wouldn't let me review. Dru punched me out of the chair and I had to sit on the desk. But I read it, and it was grrrrrreat! (pays Frosted Flakes some royalties) Hoo hoo hoo...I can't wait for more. I love my character. So cheerful and melodramatic. Too hoo, tee hee.
Bethi-sama! ^_~
1/6/2003 c10 Reisi
(HACK) WOOO BOY! That is a knee slapper...
I love Me! No cat-boys for Dru? ::::sadness:::: But its cool cuz you made me laugh, numerous times...
I found one mistake at the top but besides that it was fine ! I loveded it lots! Update again soon! Later doll!
(HACK) WOOO BOY! That is a knee slapper...
I love Me! No cat-boys for Dru? ::::sadness:::: But its cool cuz you made me laugh, numerous times...
I found one mistake at the top but besides that it was fine ! I loveded it lots! Update again soon! Later doll!
1/5/2003 c9 Cinnabar Scarlett who can't log-in because ff.net doesn't think I exist anymore
Wow! That whole thing at the end with Eirian chasing that elf dude around was reeeeaaallly funny! Then the whole things with her not jumping off the cliff but wanting to . It was really really funny! *ROFLMAO!* Yeah. I love this story! I'ts soooo godddamn funny! And Utsuno is sooo cool! Necromancer vampire wannabe elf! I couldn't really remember when I gave you the character idea thingy... ^-^;; Well yeah. You have more of this thing written!
POST IT OR DOOM WILL FALL UPON SEIRIO BEFORE HE EVER BECOMES A SEXY VAMPIRE! oh yeah. It'll fall on you, too! '-';;;;;
That was great. Soooooo funny! Eirian's sooo funny! She makes elf boys cry! WAHAHAHAHAHHAAAAA~~! Anyway, I think I'd better stop ranting about nothing.
Write more/post more sooon or else you will die a gruesome hoooorrriiibbbllleee death and all elves will be ANNHILIATED! (or however the fong you spell that word) ^_^;;
-Lukeluke with Cinder-Ash Scar
(Cinnabar Ashes Scarlett) ha ha ha... *gets slapped*
Wow! That whole thing at the end with Eirian chasing that elf dude around was reeeeaaallly funny! Then the whole things with her not jumping off the cliff but wanting to . It was really really funny! *ROFLMAO!* Yeah. I love this story! I'ts soooo godddamn funny! And Utsuno is sooo cool! Necromancer vampire wannabe elf! I couldn't really remember when I gave you the character idea thingy... ^-^;; Well yeah. You have more of this thing written!
POST IT OR DOOM WILL FALL UPON SEIRIO BEFORE HE EVER BECOMES A SEXY VAMPIRE! oh yeah. It'll fall on you, too! '-';;;;;
That was great. Soooooo funny! Eirian's sooo funny! She makes elf boys cry! WAHAHAHAHAHHAAAAA~~! Anyway, I think I'd better stop ranting about nothing.
Write more/post more sooon or else you will die a gruesome hoooorrriiibbbllleee death and all elves will be ANNHILIATED! (or however the fong you spell that word) ^_^;;
-Lukeluke with Cinder-Ash Scar
(Cinnabar Ashes Scarlett) ha ha ha... *gets slapped*