1/5/2003 c9 Cinnabar Scarlett who can't log-in because ff.net doesn't think I exist anymore
Wow! That whole thing at the end with Eirian chasing that elf dude around was reeeeaaallly funny! Then the whole things with her not jumping off the cliff but wanting to . It was really really funny! *ROFLMAO!* Yeah. I love this story! I'ts soooo godddamn funny! And Utsuno is sooo cool! Necromancer vampire wannabe elf! I couldn't really remember when I gave you the character idea thingy... ^-^;; Well yeah. You have more of this thing written!
POST IT OR DOOM WILL FALL UPON SEIRIO BEFORE HE EVER BECOMES A SEXY VAMPIRE! oh yeah. It'll fall on you, too! '-';;;;;
That was great. Soooooo funny! Eirian's sooo funny! She makes elf boys cry! WAHAHAHAHAHHAAAAA~~! Anyway, I think I'd better stop ranting about nothing.
Write more/post more sooon or else you will die a gruesome hoooorrriiibbbllleee death and all elves will be ANNHILIATED! (or however the fong you spell that word) ^_^;;
-Lukeluke with Cinder-Ash Scar
(Cinnabar Ashes Scarlett) ha ha ha... *gets slapped*
Wow! That whole thing at the end with Eirian chasing that elf dude around was reeeeaaallly funny! Then the whole things with her not jumping off the cliff but wanting to . It was really really funny! *ROFLMAO!* Yeah. I love this story! I'ts soooo godddamn funny! And Utsuno is sooo cool! Necromancer vampire wannabe elf! I couldn't really remember when I gave you the character idea thingy... ^-^;; Well yeah. You have more of this thing written!
POST IT OR DOOM WILL FALL UPON SEIRIO BEFORE HE EVER BECOMES A SEXY VAMPIRE! oh yeah. It'll fall on you, too! '-';;;;;
That was great. Soooooo funny! Eirian's sooo funny! She makes elf boys cry! WAHAHAHAHAHHAAAAA~~! Anyway, I think I'd better stop ranting about nothing.
Write more/post more sooon or else you will die a gruesome hoooorrriiibbbllleee death and all elves will be ANNHILIATED! (or however the fong you spell that word) ^_^;;
-Lukeluke with Cinder-Ash Scar
(Cinnabar Ashes Scarlett) ha ha ha... *gets slapped*
1/4/2003 c9 15Apple Kinder
Well...this is really Kyani, but whose looking at the details? Anyway, that was a sweet chapter and yes, Tsuga does annoy me...I dunno, when I think of him I just get this image of Suzaku with black hair and purple mascara...oh well...
Well...this is really Kyani, but whose looking at the details? Anyway, that was a sweet chapter and yes, Tsuga does annoy me...I dunno, when I think of him I just get this image of Suzaku with black hair and purple mascara...oh well...
12/13/2002 c1 Bethi-sama
Hey, 'tis me! ^_^ Limited amount of time, but...I felt the need to badger you.
UPDAAAAAAAAAAATE! Look, I'm drooling! I need more! AAAAAARRRRRRGH!
(dies)
(not really)
I love you, Keebs! ^_^ You are the Snack Pack Queen!
Jeth says: "...Right."
Hey, 'tis me! ^_^ Limited amount of time, but...I felt the need to badger you.
UPDAAAAAAAAAAATE! Look, I'm drooling! I need more! AAAAAARRRRRRGH!
(dies)
(not really)
I love you, Keebs! ^_^ You are the Snack Pack Queen!
Jeth says: "...Right."
12/7/2002 c8 Me
Hi, Luke here. Sorry for not reviewing for a long time! *forgive me* Anyway, I liked this chapter, as with the rest, and it's funny how well-written this story is, for the amount of "serious plot" it has, you know? It's cool! And the characters were funny. Lange torture was nifty, and it was hilarious. Hhaaaa... anyway, that was a gooood chapter, and if you don't put up more soon, (as you would say) "The fonging will be immense". Not by ME, of course... ^-^;; Sei-chan, maybe? Wait.. that's not a threat... *gak gak gak* ANYWAY, that was a really coooool chapter and the whole... "You spoke with the NORNS?" thing was funny. ^-^ I remember how she pissed Varthandei (love that spelling, luke)off in the first chapter... ^-^ and...
YAY! STARWARS reference! WHooooo! *throws a party* YAAAAAY!
Anyway, the insanity will stop...
...
...
...here!
Ja ne!
-Luke
Hi, Luke here. Sorry for not reviewing for a long time! *forgive me* Anyway, I liked this chapter, as with the rest, and it's funny how well-written this story is, for the amount of "serious plot" it has, you know? It's cool! And the characters were funny. Lange torture was nifty, and it was hilarious. Hhaaaa... anyway, that was a gooood chapter, and if you don't put up more soon, (as you would say) "The fonging will be immense". Not by ME, of course... ^-^;; Sei-chan, maybe? Wait.. that's not a threat... *gak gak gak* ANYWAY, that was a really coooool chapter and the whole... "You spoke with the NORNS?" thing was funny. ^-^ I remember how she pissed Varthandei (love that spelling, luke)off in the first chapter... ^-^ and...
YAY! STARWARS reference! WHooooo! *throws a party* YAAAAAY!
Anyway, the insanity will stop...
...
...
...here!
Ja ne!
-Luke
12/4/2002 c8 4Kyani Star
I'm VERY intriged by Lange's situation...something tells me he's not gonna get the rest he thinks he is. I love my character!The more you write the better this gets! Except for the whole Alaric situation of course...*sniffle*...
Update soon or I'll fling gifilte fish at your head!
I'm VERY intriged by Lange's situation...something tells me he's not gonna get the rest he thinks he is. I love my character!The more you write the better this gets! Except for the whole Alaric situation of course...*sniffle*...
Update soon or I'll fling gifilte fish at your head!
12/1/2002 c8 15Apple Kinder
Wow. Mere words would, no COULD not say how much I so and absolutely LOVEDED this chappie! The very combination of Author's thoughts and story was brilliant, (I try to do stuff liek that and always end up botching it up somehow or losing the plot somewhere) but urs is amazzing and u make me cry with ur talent. Damn u and my tears of absolute joy. Write more or i will use empty threats of doom upon you!
Wow. Mere words would, no COULD not say how much I so and absolutely LOVEDED this chappie! The very combination of Author's thoughts and story was brilliant, (I try to do stuff liek that and always end up botching it up somehow or losing the plot somewhere) but urs is amazzing and u make me cry with ur talent. Damn u and my tears of absolute joy. Write more or i will use empty threats of doom upon you!
12/1/2002 c8 Glass Malibu
...Hey, I'm talking to you right now! ^^
I think you know how I feel about this chapter. Still crying. (points to face) That's a tear of joy, and so's that one, and that one...but that one is due to mine stummyache...there's another one...
I love Dante. Dante is mine bish forver, no deny, love him. Love Keebs, too. (builds several shrines to the all-powerful queen of earth what is Keebs) And Keebs is perfect. And so is this storie. Mmmmm, Colts...well, there's one unperfect thing. That whole "I'm Lange and I'm missing a toe" thing. But otherwise it was great.
In this chapter I fell in love with Lange, then fell out of love with Lange when Dante was reintroduced. Man, I love Dante. Mmm, Dante...
I have a harem...and minions...I love me! And Keebs!
(cries more tears of joy) Love, Peace, and (tears of joy) Ketchup! Trigun Forever! (tears of joy) ^_^ Peace!
...Hey, I'm talking to you right now! ^^
I think you know how I feel about this chapter. Still crying. (points to face) That's a tear of joy, and so's that one, and that one...but that one is due to mine stummyache...there's another one...
I love Dante. Dante is mine bish forver, no deny, love him. Love Keebs, too. (builds several shrines to the all-powerful queen of earth what is Keebs) And Keebs is perfect. And so is this storie. Mmmmm, Colts...well, there's one unperfect thing. That whole "I'm Lange and I'm missing a toe" thing. But otherwise it was great.
In this chapter I fell in love with Lange, then fell out of love with Lange when Dante was reintroduced. Man, I love Dante. Mmm, Dante...
I have a harem...and minions...I love me! And Keebs!
(cries more tears of joy) Love, Peace, and (tears of joy) Ketchup! Trigun Forever! (tears of joy) ^_^ Peace!
11/20/2002 c7 Glass Malibu
(pours champagne all over you while dancing around and screaming) LA LA LAAA...Sorry, a li'l post-novel joy there. Did I mention that I love Randykins? He's hellasexy. ANYWAY, back to YOUR storie...really grand chapter, Keebs. The writing was outstanding, no kidding. I'm not just sucking up, either. Everything was described beautifully (character with black hair...should I start drooling?), and you still managed to fit in a little humor with the drama. Can't wait for chapter 8, and abuse of mine Dru! Arigato, sempai!
(pours champagne all over you while dancing around and screaming) LA LA LAAA...Sorry, a li'l post-novel joy there. Did I mention that I love Randykins? He's hellasexy. ANYWAY, back to YOUR storie...really grand chapter, Keebs. The writing was outstanding, no kidding. I'm not just sucking up, either. Everything was described beautifully (character with black hair...should I start drooling?), and you still managed to fit in a little humor with the drama. Can't wait for chapter 8, and abuse of mine Dru! Arigato, sempai!
11/17/2002 c7 Utsuno Yorugawa
OH MY FREAKING GOD THAT WAS SO INCREADIBLY HILARIOUS EVEN THE PARTS THAT WERENT SUPPOSED TO WHERE !
*takes a deep breath*
BWAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAA!
That was really funny. ^-^;; AAaaanyway...
I have reviewed... NOW! Bask in the craptasticness of that last review! I'm really tired, so none of this makes sense. You know how many times you had various variations of the word 'sexy' in that first part? It was like 5 times per sentance. Gee! ^-^ That was really cool, and I liked your descriptions of people. And the sky isn't falling anymore. The power of Sei-chan has prevailed against the Zettai Unmei Mokushiroku (ultimate destiny of apocalypse) and the world is happy! ^-^ That was a stupd nerdy referance.
AAAAAnnnyyywwaaay... thay was cool! Coool! cooooooool!
COOOOOOOL!
(betcha didn't see that comming ^_^;;)
Who's lame! *raises hand*
Well, you can have fun with our pineapple veggies and all, and your misuse of 'bipolar' Btw, I really loved the name of this chapter. I love this story. IT's sooo... COOOOOOOOL! And funny and
(Luke will now stop worshipping)
Ja ne!
P.S. Can you tell that Ive eaten NOTHING but sugary foods today? I'm gonna have SUCH a headache. Sorry for the stupidness of this review. FORGIVE ME MASTER KEEBLER!
*grovels*
That was a nice "well-written" chapter, if you get my drift. I loooooved, as always, the dialogue and interaction between the characters. And your authors notes at the end are really funny. Mine are lame, but yours are FUNNY! Put more of this story up or the sky WILL be falling down on you!
Cinnabar Scarlett
(sorry for the dorkieness! *grovels more*)
OH MY FREAKING GOD THAT WAS SO INCREADIBLY HILARIOUS EVEN THE PARTS THAT WERENT SUPPOSED TO WHERE !
*takes a deep breath*
BWAAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHAA!
That was really funny. ^-^;; AAaaanyway...
I have reviewed... NOW! Bask in the craptasticness of that last review! I'm really tired, so none of this makes sense. You know how many times you had various variations of the word 'sexy' in that first part? It was like 5 times per sentance. Gee! ^-^ That was really cool, and I liked your descriptions of people. And the sky isn't falling anymore. The power of Sei-chan has prevailed against the Zettai Unmei Mokushiroku (ultimate destiny of apocalypse) and the world is happy! ^-^ That was a stupd nerdy referance.
AAAAAnnnyyywwaaay... thay was cool! Coool! cooooooool!
COOOOOOOL!
(betcha didn't see that comming ^_^;;)
Who's lame! *raises hand*
Well, you can have fun with our pineapple veggies and all, and your misuse of 'bipolar' Btw, I really loved the name of this chapter. I love this story. IT's sooo... COOOOOOOOL! And funny and
(Luke will now stop worshipping)
Ja ne!
P.S. Can you tell that Ive eaten NOTHING but sugary foods today? I'm gonna have SUCH a headache. Sorry for the stupidness of this review. FORGIVE ME MASTER KEEBLER!
*grovels*
That was a nice "well-written" chapter, if you get my drift. I loooooved, as always, the dialogue and interaction between the characters. And your authors notes at the end are really funny. Mine are lame, but yours are FUNNY! Put more of this story up or the sky WILL be falling down on you!
Cinnabar Scarlett
(sorry for the dorkieness! *grovels more*)
11/17/2002 c6 Cinny-boy
That was really cool. Much more serious for the most part than some of the other first chapters, Keebler. ^-^ That's a good thing, in some respects, I guess. I liked it. ^-^;; So tired... AAANYWAY, That was really cool and bloooody for some parts and the thingy with Lange at the end was funny ^-^ (even though I'm nto sure if you meant it to be). Well, off to read the next one!
-me
That was really cool. Much more serious for the most part than some of the other first chapters, Keebler. ^-^ That's a good thing, in some respects, I guess. I liked it. ^-^;; So tired... AAANYWAY, That was really cool and bloooody for some parts and the thingy with Lange at the end was funny ^-^ (even though I'm nto sure if you meant it to be). Well, off to read the next one!
-me
11/16/2002 c7 Apple Kinder
Oh my gods! i never thought of that! But alas no, I would shove your other and LEAGAL children off walls in eggshells, that is, if you should refuse my demands!
Point 1: More NAMELESS OR ELSE!
Point 2:More NAMELESS OR ELSE!
& point 3: The worlds supply of plushie stuffings!
thankies in advanced, I need it for when i rule the world and we all live in Jaimitopia! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
Oh my gods! i never thought of that! But alas no, I would shove your other and LEAGAL children off walls in eggshells, that is, if you should refuse my demands!
Point 1: More NAMELESS OR ELSE!
Point 2:More NAMELESS OR ELSE!
& point 3: The worlds supply of plushie stuffings!
thankies in advanced, I need it for when i rule the world and we all live in Jaimitopia! BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
11/16/2002 c7 4Kyani Star
This chapter is awesome. I like the random bipolar kimono girl, but...! That can't happen to Alaric! I shall hunt down Lange and use HIS soul to revive Alaric! Grrr..Alaric does get better...somehow...right?
Update soon!
This chapter is awesome. I like the random bipolar kimono girl, but...! That can't happen to Alaric! I shall hunt down Lange and use HIS soul to revive Alaric! Grrr..Alaric does get better...somehow...right?
Update soon!
11/12/2002 c6 Glass Malibu
*sings through a mouthfull of yummy yummy peanut butter sandwhich* KEEBS...IS MINE GOD...HER STORIES MAKE ME GRIN...Wow, how'd you manage to capture mine essence and shove it into mine character like that? I love being that way! ^^ I guess it can sort of be gathered...according to SOME PEOPLE...Ellie was actually based on me. Well they can bite me, for all I care. I wanted Randykins...*throws some cheese at her doggie*
I love this thing so much...Keebler esta dio. Si, si. Man...I love mine character, too. I'm such a bitch! Tee hee! ^^
I also love the little reference to mine expertise in the art of glomping...that made me giggle. I was at this con once, and me and Kyani were explaining to some random guy that I'm a professional. I successfully glomped a guy who's about six five...so I'm so happy! ^^ Happy happy!
I don't know what to say! It's so grand! Keep writing or I'll beat you with mine French Horn! *smackaroonie!*
Love, Peace, and Ketchup! Trigun Forever! ^_^ Peace!
*sings through a mouthfull of yummy yummy peanut butter sandwhich* KEEBS...IS MINE GOD...HER STORIES MAKE ME GRIN...Wow, how'd you manage to capture mine essence and shove it into mine character like that? I love being that way! ^^ I guess it can sort of be gathered...according to SOME PEOPLE...Ellie was actually based on me. Well they can bite me, for all I care. I wanted Randykins...*throws some cheese at her doggie*
I love this thing so much...Keebler esta dio. Si, si. Man...I love mine character, too. I'm such a bitch! Tee hee! ^^
I also love the little reference to mine expertise in the art of glomping...that made me giggle. I was at this con once, and me and Kyani were explaining to some random guy that I'm a professional. I successfully glomped a guy who's about six five...so I'm so happy! ^^ Happy happy!
I don't know what to say! It's so grand! Keep writing or I'll beat you with mine French Horn! *smackaroonie!*
Love, Peace, and Ketchup! Trigun Forever! ^_^ Peace!
11/11/2002 c6 Kyani Star
hehehe...Ping Mei may have only had a brief appearence, but it was so very like her! Great chapter, it wasn't too violent at all. Poor Aaron though...so many of these people don't like elves. If I was in the boss, I'd something to make them respect us! Wait, I am the boss^_^; Anyway, keep the story coming!
hehehe...Ping Mei may have only had a brief appearence, but it was so very like her! Great chapter, it wasn't too violent at all. Poor Aaron though...so many of these people don't like elves. If I was in the boss, I'd something to make them respect us! Wait, I am the boss^_^; Anyway, keep the story coming!
11/11/2002 c6 15Apple Kinder
LOTS MORE OR ELSE! YOU WILL PARISH IF YOU DO NOT WRITE MORE! I WILL GRIND YOUR BONES FOR PAPRIKA AND YOUR CHILDREN WILL BE PUT INTO EGGSHELLS TO BE SHOVED OFF A WALL IF YOU DO NOT WRITE MORE! LOVE{AHEM} love you lots, DRU
LOTS MORE OR ELSE! YOU WILL PARISH IF YOU DO NOT WRITE MORE! I WILL GRIND YOUR BONES FOR PAPRIKA AND YOUR CHILDREN WILL BE PUT INTO EGGSHELLS TO BE SHOVED OFF A WALL IF YOU DO NOT WRITE MORE! LOVE{AHEM} love you lots, DRU