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1/14/2007 c1 M.D.Irvine
lol interesting the thoughts of a lab rat, innovative
1/4/2007 c1 6Imaginary Parachute
Wow. This is really great. I don't know if it's just because I'm a total animals' rights activist or what, but I really love this. It has a really tasteful bit of humor mixed in with quite a shrewd insight into a completely different mind. Writing in a totally different perspective is always hard, whether it's a girl writing as a guy or a girl writing as a rat. Great work; I really enjoyed it.
1/4/2007 c1 1addicted2cocoa
Never read anything like this before! A very humorous piece.
12/31/2006 c1 5HawkDancer
Aw, poor lab rat! There's some grammar and spelling you need to work on for this piece though. "Rotton" is spelled "rotten". ^_^ Overall, good job. I still feel bad for the lab rat though.

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12/31/2006 c1 17angels and effects
Haha, pretty cute ending there! I guess that since this was written quite some time ago, the grammar is kind of sub-standard, but I think you've improved a lot from then, yeah? Interesting take on a lab mouse - do tuna and cheese smell the same though? Hmm.
11/17/2006 c1 14letsdotheraindance
Haha. Weird topic but that was what made it funny. =)) Poor lab mouse... =((
4/21/2005 c1 aknightsgoldenrose
lol I loved it especially the ending. Poor little mouse. :)
10/17/2003 c1 4genteel
really interesting perspective...haha.. i look forward to reading more of your works :)

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