for Why Cat's Eyes Glow8/21/2007 c1 LeChem
Ha ha, din din. That is a very intersting explaination for why cats' eyes glow. I never thought of it that way. Personally it just creeps me out when I step outside and see my cat staring at me from the garden. Anyway, very good!
Ha ha, din din. That is a very intersting explaination for why cats' eyes glow. I never thought of it that way. Personally it just creeps me out when I step outside and see my cat staring at me from the garden. Anyway, very good!
12/20/2006 c1 myapologiesnolongerinuse
That was a very interesting ending! The imagery was great and the emotions of the poor cat well portrayed.
That was a very interesting ending! The imagery was great and the emotions of the poor cat well portrayed.
5/2/2005 c1 
11ShianeCollins
Oh, wow. That was good for a laugh. I'd have to agree with the cat's point of view in this. Very descriptive I'd have to add.
And I'd also have to add a thank you for reading A Fox's Touch. Truth be told it used to be a fanfic, but sounded way too original and not enough fanfictionness. Thank you again for your wonderful reviews.
11ShianeCollinsOh, wow. That was good for a laugh. I'd have to agree with the cat's point of view in this. Very descriptive I'd have to add.
And I'd also have to add a thank you for reading A Fox's Touch. Truth be told it used to be a fanfic, but sounded way too original and not enough fanfictionness. Thank you again for your wonderful reviews.
9/28/2004 c1 3Mystica Dragon
very good. You're right about scientists making a science of sucking the fun out of everything.(haha)
Oh, and If you have nothing to do one day and feel that all you can do is read one of my pitiful stories, I would love it if you'd drop me a review for 'In the eyes of a Warrior'
3Mystica Dragonvery good. You're right about scientists making a science of sucking the fun out of everything.(haha)
Oh, and If you have nothing to do one day and feel that all you can do is read one of my pitiful stories, I would love it if you'd drop me a review for 'In the eyes of a Warrior'
6/12/2004 c1 16RuathaWehrling
Hey there! Let me take a look...
1.) "She?s hungry, so are you." - Semicolon, not a comma.
2.) "Claws from velvet and a swift pounce?mouse in the air and a cat?s laugh. Cruel huntress tosses her meal from paw to paw..." - VERY nice. Good imagery and sense of rhythm.
Oh! That ending is VERY startling! Poor depressed little kitty! Somebody needs to go see a cat shrink! :)
Nicely written. Thanks much for the story!
Ruatha
16RuathaWehrlingHey there! Let me take a look...
1.) "She?s hungry, so are you." - Semicolon, not a comma.
2.) "Claws from velvet and a swift pounce?mouse in the air and a cat?s laugh. Cruel huntress tosses her meal from paw to paw..." - VERY nice. Good imagery and sense of rhythm.
Oh! That ending is VERY startling! Poor depressed little kitty! Somebody needs to go see a cat shrink! :)
Nicely written. Thanks much for the story!
Ruatha
5/25/2004 c1 132mizu no kokoro
lol~ cats are cute, but dogs seem alot more friendly, o well~ this little description such is still kool^^ keep writing!
132mizu no kokorolol~ cats are cute, but dogs seem alot more friendly, o well~ this little description such is still kool^^ keep writing!
4/15/2004 c1 Greeneyes616
yeah cat story!...I really liked this, cause its so original, and out of the box, and cause its a pov thats never really been done, but I really like it, keep up the good work:)
~Greeneyes616
yeah cat story!...I really liked this, cause its so original, and out of the box, and cause its a pov thats never really been done, but I really like it, keep up the good work:)
~Greeneyes616
1/18/2004 c1 54Werecat99
Hehe, that was cute. My own critters just *love* to hunt their canned food...
54Werecat99Hehe, that was cute. My own critters just *love* to hunt their canned food...
10/8/2003 c1 8Aureya of Chocolate
oh, nice
you have really good imagery (Y)
good work, keep it up!
lotsa luv,
jazzo
8Aureya of Chocolateoh, nice
you have really good imagery (Y)
good work, keep it up!
lotsa luv,
jazzo
7/12/2003 c1 6AliceBowie
my kind of story ~purrs and winks~ lol
love cats and i love it when they hunt
thanks for reviewing and dont worry you didnt sound mean.that wasnt how i wrote my story. my editor kept putting those in and i just sent it here with out reading it. im gonna leave it like that for a bit. make another chapter will you! what will this little kitten do next? why doesnt fluffy just escape?
6AliceBowiemy kind of story ~purrs and winks~ lol
love cats and i love it when they hunt
thanks for reviewing and dont worry you didnt sound mean.that wasnt how i wrote my story. my editor kept putting those in and i just sent it here with out reading it. im gonna leave it like that for a bit. make another chapter will you! what will this little kitten do next? why doesnt fluffy just escape?
7/10/2003 c1 4Alliekatze
I'll accept anything about a cat, seeing as I'm a cat lover and have five myself. However, this wasn't just anything. You have wonderful imagery, and it really paints a picture in my mind. Keep writing. You're doing great.
4AlliekatzeI'll accept anything about a cat, seeing as I'm a cat lover and have five myself. However, this wasn't just anything. You have wonderful imagery, and it really paints a picture in my mind. Keep writing. You're doing great.
3/8/2003 c1 206MoshiMoshiQueen
I thought this was very good! I have a cat of my own right now and I love to look at her glowing eyes, because yes they are yellow but they gave a green ring around the pupil so it makes them look beauitful. I really loved this, you should keep writing!
206MoshiMoshiQueenI thought this was very good! I have a cat of my own right now and I love to look at her glowing eyes, because yes they are yellow but they gave a green ring around the pupil so it makes them look beauitful. I really loved this, you should keep writing!
9/16/2002 c1 14Chris Creevy
Not bad, but this is more of a poem then it is a story, why not switch it?
14Chris CreevyNot bad, but this is more of a poem then it is a story, why not switch it?