for Another Vampire Story?10/8/2006 c1 princessdaisyroxs
A vampire that does something good for people? Cool... How come no one has ever thought of something like that?
A vampire that does something good for people? Cool... How come no one has ever thought of something like that?
7/8/2006 c1 
7family alive
I never expected the story to end like this. It's a great work-it changes my view on the subject of vampires.
Very descriptive, also.
-Fee
7family aliveI never expected the story to end like this. It's a great work-it changes my view on the subject of vampires.
Very descriptive, also.
-Fee
1/4/2006 c1 47mystic-georgia
That was.. er.. 1) Sweet but cheesy and2) Unusual.
On another note, you played out the story very well. Clever with the use of colour of his clothing. WHat would you call him in the Vamp Society? A White Vamp? Kind of reminds me of the Psi Vamp at the same time though. Hehe. ;)
47mystic-georgiaThat was.. er.. 1) Sweet but cheesy and2) Unusual.
On another note, you played out the story very well. Clever with the use of colour of his clothing. WHat would you call him in the Vamp Society? A White Vamp? Kind of reminds me of the Psi Vamp at the same time though. Hehe. ;)
12/12/2005 c1 anyalm
that was so great! I loved it! Especially the vampire part! I wish you wouldn't oneshot it! Great story
PEaches,
Anya
that was so great! I loved it! Especially the vampire part! I wish you wouldn't oneshot it! Great story
PEaches,
Anya
2/26/2005 c1 Laura
This is definitely the coolest vampire story I've ever read. Vampires draining people of suffering? That's really cool.
This is definitely the coolest vampire story I've ever read. Vampires draining people of suffering? That's really cool.
11/8/2004 c1 emotionlessangel37
umm.. that's it? she lives? at least turn her into a vampire. and he can be in sunlight without the whole bursting into flames thing? ok then...
umm.. that's it? she lives? at least turn her into a vampire. and he can be in sunlight without the whole bursting into flames thing? ok then...
7/17/2004 c1 Hannah
this was a great story. well written. i've never seen this idea before. generally there's just the generic vampire, who drains peoples' blood and has no reflection in the mirror and is scared off by garlic.
again... great story.
this was a great story. well written. i've never seen this idea before. generally there's just the generic vampire, who drains peoples' blood and has no reflection in the mirror and is scared off by garlic.
again... great story.
5/28/2004 c1 kate molly anders
kewl story. your very right about vamps. you write good.
kewl story. your very right about vamps. you write good.
4/17/2004 c1 39Lestette
That was different, and original, I'll give you that. I'm not really sure that I liked it though... I mean you had a really good idea here, and the story did keep my attention the whole way through. I just kinda feel there could have been more detail you could have added to it, I don't know it just seemed like something was missing... I mean, this story did work without the whole "indepth detail" thing, I mean, sometimes to many details are bad because you loose grips on the story, so that worked well here... I'm not sure how you feel about the story, I just feel like there is a little something missing. It was well done though.
39LestetteThat was different, and original, I'll give you that. I'm not really sure that I liked it though... I mean you had a really good idea here, and the story did keep my attention the whole way through. I just kinda feel there could have been more detail you could have added to it, I don't know it just seemed like something was missing... I mean, this story did work without the whole "indepth detail" thing, I mean, sometimes to many details are bad because you loose grips on the story, so that worked well here... I'm not sure how you feel about the story, I just feel like there is a little something missing. It was well done though.
11/19/2003 c1 2Hisan-sa
Aleck is awesome, a very well described character. You make my work look pathetic. Oh well, nicely written.
2Hisan-saAleck is awesome, a very well described character. You make my work look pathetic. Oh well, nicely written.
10/20/2003 c1 unclepauly
Don't know how I missed this one, thought I'd read all the "Just Another Vampire Story" stories.
But it's good, yet another warping of the conventional themes of a vampire story, living up to the good name (in my opinion at least) of your quite wonderful series.
Don't know how I missed this one, thought I'd read all the "Just Another Vampire Story" stories.
But it's good, yet another warping of the conventional themes of a vampire story, living up to the good name (in my opinion at least) of your quite wonderful series.
9/2/2003 c1 3Katharine Emily Francis
That is so sad. I was hopeing that he'd make her into one and they'd go off and live together. Or at least he could have killed her.
But hey, it was good either way.
Be seeing you. :)
3Katharine Emily FrancisThat is so sad. I was hopeing that he'd make her into one and they'd go off and live together. Or at least he could have killed her.
But hey, it was good either way.
Be seeing you. :)