for Dream Water6/18/2006 c1 Noihseret
I like the names ^^ Brian. typical american name. lol. i noticed the spacing was a bit distracting. if you want the paragraphs closer to each other then just hold down shift and then hit enter when your editing the chapter/story. if you already knew that then sorry... -_-'
great job. write on ^^
I like the names ^^ Brian. typical american name. lol. i noticed the spacing was a bit distracting. if you want the paragraphs closer to each other then just hold down shift and then hit enter when your editing the chapter/story. if you already knew that then sorry... -_-'
great job. write on ^^
2/14/2004 c1 
14Grape
*lauhgs* This is a reall odd story and I like it its funny to! I kinda feel sorry for Hiroshi though..Post the next chapter soon!
14Grape*lauhgs* This is a reall odd story and I like it its funny to! I kinda feel sorry for Hiroshi though..Post the next chapter soon!
9/13/2003 c2 Bloodglow
cute story,
cute story,
5/9/2003 c1 Raison D'etre
Great fic! It was a little hard to read as all of the text didn't fit fully on the screen and you have to keep scrolling left and right to read the ends of the sentences. Try not to put author's notes in the middle of the story, it kinda breaks up the flow of things. Use ** instead and put explainations at the bottom of the chapter. Other than that, really good.
Great fic! It was a little hard to read as all of the text didn't fit fully on the screen and you have to keep scrolling left and right to read the ends of the sentences. Try not to put author's notes in the middle of the story, it kinda breaks up the flow of things. Use ** instead and put explainations at the bottom of the chapter. Other than that, really good.
11/23/2002 c1 Kichigo
Wowies I didn't know a sucky person like you could write something that good...J/K! ok...my review!... : If ya dun update, Imma hafta hurtchu.
Wowies I didn't know a sucky person like you could write something that good...J/K! ok...my review!... : If ya dun update, Imma hafta hurtchu.
11/2/2002 c1 2Fumi Ayakoganei
Kawaii! Hiro-chyan's cute! =^-^=
Falling for an 8th grader? O_o Ooo...Gotta read more! *adds this to her favs* YaY! =^-^=
Gonna continue? You GOTTA!
2Fumi AyakoganeiKawaii! Hiro-chyan's cute! =^-^=
Falling for an 8th grader? O_o Ooo...Gotta read more! *adds this to her favs* YaY! =^-^=
Gonna continue? You GOTTA!
9/18/2002 c1 9Mada DuVaris
THis is so cute! hey where are you from? that you can get Inu-Yasha DVD's ? this story cracks me up! I likes it ^_^
9Mada DuVarisTHis is so cute! hey where are you from? that you can get Inu-Yasha DVD's ? this story cracks me up! I likes it ^_^
9/17/2002 c1 20Bringin' Home the Bacon
Neato, but make it more like magic or whatever. I'm almost getting bored. But good so far.
20Bringin' Home the BaconNeato, but make it more like magic or whatever. I'm almost getting bored. But good so far.