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2/27/2003 c3 Ellex
Please write more! I *need* to hear more.

If you do I'll find Riku for you and give him to you as a present.

^_^ *puts a gift ribbon on him*
10/4/2002 c3 yuna10Gothie
nice story!
10/1/2002 c3 2lyradaisical
OMG! I didn't know Fumi had a twin!

I hope Tsusaru doesn't kill her O.o
10/1/2002 c3 7Souzou-chan
I'm so sorry that I never got to review chapter two, but when I tried to I had to get to work with my Design stuff since I was reading it in college afterall. Bt now I will leave this review to say the last chapter plus this were great! *cries* One of the most important episode in my Project M.I.S.T. anime and I'VE BEEN COMPLETELY STUCK SINCE JULY! *cries a river and all her M.I.S.T. chibi's go swimming*
9/28/2002 c2 Willow
*claps* so far its lovelely done! please do continue! 10 out of 10 cookie pts!
9/26/2002 c2 Elle
Great story! I can't wait to hear more, I'm liking as to where this is leading(I'm wonder how this is going to be?)...anyway, I love the characters...and the idea of the Other World...please cont. ^_^
9/18/2002 c1 13Tsurai Sana
^_^ this was so sweet! very sweet...poor Fumi :::sniff sniff:::! i love the way you write so you better write more soon k? onegai?

~Enchantress Tsurai

P.S.

Arigatou for reading "Chitoseame: Tenshi Usagi!" you were the only one and it made me happy know that your reading so...DUN EVER STOP reading and writing! ^^'
9/18/2002 c1 1Gothie
great story! lottsa fluff,me like! XD
9/18/2002 c1 2lyradaisical
Hihi^_^ It's me mai-chan. I changed my pen name so I justed to let u know.

Anyways, me like your new story and me want you to continue as soon as possible okie?
9/18/2002 c1 7Souzou-chan
I loved this prologue. It was very descriptive with the use of phrauses like "the dark solemn clouds which were in a dangerous shade of grey and pregnant with rain." I loved that line plus others but there's so many that I shouldn't use space up losting them. It was also very emotional, and adding the song I was listening to I nearly broke out into tears. It felt so realistic. I would love to see more of this story sometime when more chapters are produced. Until then, ja ne!
9/18/2002 c1 1Ishi
Poor you, she doesn't like the fact your into anime? My grandmother is like that.

A word of advice, don't use japanese in your stories unless your going to write the entire thing in japanese. It is very annoying and even though you provided translations at the bottom is still troublesome. People don't like japlish.

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