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6/6/2006 c1 21Aella88
Wow! I really like this piece. It is short but heartfelt. I like how you began with her thoughts, like her journal. Then ended with them finding her. I think that your ending with her final words about the phoenix makes a stunning finale.
12/21/2002 c1 Ariax
this really is a great piece of work. i love the reference to the phoenix, it makes it all so much more real. it makes the girl in the story real and is that not wat we strive for in writing? well done!
9/18/2002 c1 GoodbyeDeleteThisPage
I absolutely love this! This captures many of my emotions. I really like the last line. It's like in all of the horror of her life, she had one last thought of hope. She didn't feel she died in vain. But she did, and that's the tragedy of it. But to fool one's self is the goal in life. I like your style. It reminds me of my own. I like your other work also. Keep up the good work and look to the stars!

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