for At Last6/12/2007 c27 
34RhythmOfMySoul
Wow. This chapter was powerfully written. It almost makes you want to be mad at Sy, but when it's explained like that, you really can't.
Great job! I'm sad that there will be no Sy Brooke relationship but I guess I understand.
34RhythmOfMySoulWow. This chapter was powerfully written. It almost makes you want to be mad at Sy, but when it's explained like that, you really can't.
Great job! I'm sad that there will be no Sy Brooke relationship but I guess I understand.
6/12/2007 c26 RhythmOfMySoul
AH! NO! Why? That sucks so bad! The accident and him calling her Rachel and EVERYTHING. UGH! and things were going so well and it was so cute and everything! this sucks
AH! NO! Why? That sucks so bad! The accident and him calling her Rachel and EVERYTHING. UGH! and things were going so well and it was so cute and everything! this sucks
6/12/2007 c24 RhythmOfMySoul
AW! I'm so glad they're together! It's so cute!
Poor James. He seriously fucked up.
AW! I'm so glad they're together! It's so cute!
Poor James. He seriously fucked up.
6/12/2007 c22 RhythmOfMySoul
Greatness. Pure greatness.
I'm glad James walked away in the end. I don't think it would have sat well with anyone if him and Hugh got into a fight.
And I loved Ty's overprotectiveness. Kinda reminds me of my older brothers
Greatness. Pure greatness.
I'm glad James walked away in the end. I don't think it would have sat well with anyone if him and Hugh got into a fight.
And I loved Ty's overprotectiveness. Kinda reminds me of my older brothers
6/12/2007 c21 RhythmOfMySoul
That is definitely my new favorite word. Cojones. I LOVE it!
It's funny how smart Hugh is to use Brooke and Rachel for his gain. I never thought he had it in him, but apparently he does. I'm glad Brooke set him straight in the end
That is definitely my new favorite word. Cojones. I LOVE it!
It's funny how smart Hugh is to use Brooke and Rachel for his gain. I never thought he had it in him, but apparently he does. I'm glad Brooke set him straight in the end
6/12/2007 c20 RhythmOfMySoul
Ahh, the more I know about Sy the less I want Brooke and James to get together and the more I want B and Sy to get together. The man is just TOO SEXY!
Great chapter! I really loved it
Ahh, the more I know about Sy the less I want Brooke and James to get together and the more I want B and Sy to get together. The man is just TOO SEXY!
Great chapter! I really loved it
6/12/2007 c19 RhythmOfMySoul
AH! the ENDING! oh my gosh! The intensity is amazing! i really just want to press that sweet little button and go to the next chapter, but I had to review this chap.
VERY well written! I think you did well describing the game since I could follow it and I know absolutely nothing about basketball except get the ball in the hoop. Great job!
AH! the ENDING! oh my gosh! The intensity is amazing! i really just want to press that sweet little button and go to the next chapter, but I had to review this chap.
VERY well written! I think you did well describing the game since I could follow it and I know absolutely nothing about basketball except get the ball in the hoop. Great job!
6/11/2007 c18 RhythmOfMySoul
" “Cuz, man... you, Sy, every day.” He grinned. “That shit’d be better than Days of Our Lives.”" AHAHAHAHA. Oh man, that is the greatest line! I love it!
Nice ending. Not as great as the others, but still nice.
Poor Brooke, with Sy messing with her and her all concerned over her stupid bitch of a sister. That really sucks. great chapter
" “Cuz, man... you, Sy, every day.” He grinned. “That shit’d be better than Days of Our Lives.”" AHAHAHAHA. Oh man, that is the greatest line! I love it!
Nice ending. Not as great as the others, but still nice.
Poor Brooke, with Sy messing with her and her all concerned over her stupid bitch of a sister. That really sucks. great chapter
6/11/2007 c17 RhythmOfMySoul
[middle of chapter review]
oh man. so much drama. so much info to process. that marking thing? kinda sexy in it's own way, but not... yeah. it was interesting, cool.
So I'm guessing the S on Sy's chest was for Sky or something? So many questions answered, still so many to go...
Oh, and the whole rap music incident cleared up all my confusion about the race thing.
Great ending! As usual :)
[middle of chapter review]
oh man. so much drama. so much info to process. that marking thing? kinda sexy in it's own way, but not... yeah. it was interesting, cool.
So I'm guessing the S on Sy's chest was for Sky or something? So many questions answered, still so many to go...
Oh, and the whole rap music incident cleared up all my confusion about the race thing.
Great ending! As usual :)
6/11/2007 c15 RhythmOfMySoul
Very very cute. Rachel's still a bitch. Hugh is being brainwashed. James is becoming sweet. I really hope Ci and Aaron become an item and that's all for now!
Very very cute. Rachel's still a bitch. Hugh is being brainwashed. James is becoming sweet. I really hope Ci and Aaron become an item and that's all for now!
6/11/2007 c28 3oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATE
oh me god... AH(breathe)AH(breathe)AH(breathe)AH
i cant believe that hugh did that! well yes i can, he's EVIL! but i mean that was unnecessary. i also cant believe what brooke and james said during their argument(i refuse to call it sommething else because if i do i think they might nor end up together and we cant have that now can we.) but im glad that they sorta forgace each other. i hope they get together bu not too soon because then the story might end and i dont want it to end soon. good chapter. i hate and at the same time love the sort of cliff hanger you left. it is and at the same time it isn't a cliff hanger. yeah i know im confuzzled by my own statement too. now how sad is that :)
well as long as it doesn't take 3 more months like some of the stories that i'm reading for you to update than its fine. some authors take one or two weeks to update and others take like a month.
well if your alive after you read this you have my blessings because you are officially an immortal being. lol :D well dont die while reading this. cant wait for more :)
3oh.look.a.bird.CHOCOLATEoh me god... AH(breathe)AH(breathe)AH(breathe)AH
i cant believe that hugh did that! well yes i can, he's EVIL! but i mean that was unnecessary. i also cant believe what brooke and james said during their argument(i refuse to call it sommething else because if i do i think they might nor end up together and we cant have that now can we.) but im glad that they sorta forgace each other. i hope they get together bu not too soon because then the story might end and i dont want it to end soon. good chapter. i hate and at the same time love the sort of cliff hanger you left. it is and at the same time it isn't a cliff hanger. yeah i know im confuzzled by my own statement too. now how sad is that :)
well as long as it doesn't take 3 more months like some of the stories that i'm reading for you to update than its fine. some authors take one or two weeks to update and others take like a month.
well if your alive after you read this you have my blessings because you are officially an immortal being. lol :D well dont die while reading this. cant wait for more :)
6/11/2007 c14 34RhythmOfMySoul
Great chapter! I really like who Aaron picked Brooke to go on a date with.
That sucks what Skylar did. She's such a bitch. Brooke should get the whole school against her. that would be interesting.
34RhythmOfMySoulGreat chapter! I really like who Aaron picked Brooke to go on a date with.
That sucks what Skylar did. She's such a bitch. Brooke should get the whole school against her. that would be interesting.