for At Last2/5/2011 c38 
1would you if you could
This is really good!
It has taken a while to finish it, mind. haha
1would you if you couldThis is really good!
It has taken a while to finish it, mind. haha
2/3/2011 c38 5Slayin-Em
Ah, I haven't reviewed this in awhile, I had to reread a bunch of the chapters to remember what was going on but I am so delighted that James and Brooke are finally together, and happy! E I'm just so happy! Gosh, you're an excellent writer, I could only hope to be 1/4 as good as you are. Great job at writing and building up the relationship between these two, it was written perfectly. And as much as I love James, I love Sy too. I can just picture him so perfectly in my head, sigh. I want a Sy of my own. Anyway, enough blabbing. Good job! Can't wait for the next update!
5Slayin-EmAh, I haven't reviewed this in awhile, I had to reread a bunch of the chapters to remember what was going on but I am so delighted that James and Brooke are finally together, and happy! E I'm just so happy! Gosh, you're an excellent writer, I could only hope to be 1/4 as good as you are. Great job at writing and building up the relationship between these two, it was written perfectly. And as much as I love James, I love Sy too. I can just picture him so perfectly in my head, sigh. I want a Sy of my own. Anyway, enough blabbing. Good job! Can't wait for the next update!
1/7/2011 c38 10cherrypiesizzle
Excellent...except, I thought that the ending was a bit too sudden, and too neat? I would have liked more build-up. It kind of seemed like it was handed to us on a silver platter. Those are just my observations, but other than that, great job as usual!
10cherrypiesizzleExcellent...except, I thought that the ending was a bit too sudden, and too neat? I would have liked more build-up. It kind of seemed like it was handed to us on a silver platter. Those are just my observations, but other than that, great job as usual!
1/7/2011 c38 ess3sandra
I'm glad that she pulled trough. Facing her feelings can be one of the hardest things.
I find it a bit strange that she can forgive Sy and not her sister.
I'm glad that she pulled trough. Facing her feelings can be one of the hardest things.
I find it a bit strange that she can forgive Sy and not her sister.
12/16/2010 c37 4Calliope
Wow! Ok so I figured it would go either way. She'd stay with Sy and continue that love story with a new friend, James, added to her circle. Or something would go down with Sy and she would maybe develope something with James. Either way, its an excellent story :) Poor James :'( I understand his dilemma but at the same time, if he leaves her that will be confirming her doubts about him lasting after the first time. Well, I can't wait for more :D ...There is more, right? I hope so.
4CalliopeWow! Ok so I figured it would go either way. She'd stay with Sy and continue that love story with a new friend, James, added to her circle. Or something would go down with Sy and she would maybe develope something with James. Either way, its an excellent story :) Poor James :'( I understand his dilemma but at the same time, if he leaves her that will be confirming her doubts about him lasting after the first time. Well, I can't wait for more :D ...There is more, right? I hope so.
12/8/2010 c37 krazycutiechic
wow, more chapters! awesome! Man, Brookes just being a bitch to him, lol.
She needs to get her act in gear. Glad your updating more frequently!
wow, more chapters! awesome! Man, Brookes just being a bitch to him, lol.
She needs to get her act in gear. Glad your updating more frequently!
12/2/2010 c37 ghurl00
Dayum. They broke up. :/ :|
And now her reactionary is out. And look what caused that.
She needs to fix it. ASAP!
As usual, can't wait for the next update. :)
Dayum. They broke up. :/ :|
And now her reactionary is out. And look what caused that.
She needs to fix it. ASAP!
As usual, can't wait for the next update. :)
12/2/2010 c37 10cherrypiesizzle
I KNEW IT! It was getting too good to be true! And Brooke needed to shape up as well considering how their relationship was going and James was always trying enough for both of them, which isn't good enough.
And the comment I made about how James is the girl in the relationship; I actually like it. It's really refreshing, seeing a guy so responsible and so considerate compared to all the jackass male leads in many other romance novels. I didn't mean for this to be a bad comment, because I really like James =)
10cherrypiesizzleI KNEW IT! It was getting too good to be true! And Brooke needed to shape up as well considering how their relationship was going and James was always trying enough for both of them, which isn't good enough.
And the comment I made about how James is the girl in the relationship; I actually like it. It's really refreshing, seeing a guy so responsible and so considerate compared to all the jackass male leads in many other romance novels. I didn't mean for this to be a bad comment, because I really like James =)
12/2/2010 c37 ess3sandra
I would have guessed some sort of interaction between her and her sister, despite positve or negative outcome.
I'm glad James is finally standing up for himself, relationships are all about balans, you made the charachter really realistic!
I would have guessed some sort of interaction between her and her sister, despite positve or negative outcome.
I'm glad James is finally standing up for himself, relationships are all about balans, you made the charachter really realistic!
12/2/2010 c37 34RhythmOfMySoul
GREAT chapter! This came out of NOWHERE! First they were all good and everything was great and then BAMN! She's trying to figure out whether she's done with him or not. I wonder if she was actually going to break up with him or if he just assumed so?
The only critique I would have is that I kind of expected something bad to happen because Brooke was all "she just didn't expect things to work out so smoothly." I know that Brooke tends to have those doubts because of her past, but I think it would have been better for me as the reader if that wasn't there because I wouldn't have been expecting the bad and I would have been more shocked.
34RhythmOfMySoulGREAT chapter! This came out of NOWHERE! First they were all good and everything was great and then BAMN! She's trying to figure out whether she's done with him or not. I wonder if she was actually going to break up with him or if he just assumed so?
The only critique I would have is that I kind of expected something bad to happen because Brooke was all "she just didn't expect things to work out so smoothly." I know that Brooke tends to have those doubts because of her past, but I think it would have been better for me as the reader if that wasn't there because I wouldn't have been expecting the bad and I would have been more shocked.
12/2/2010 c37 6Courtney-chan
Hon, it was always James from the beginning! We all knew it, Sy was just a distraction.
Brooke needs to put on her big girl panties and look at how she feels, no rules, or any other bullshit!
Side note, I think you've been working on this thing for 8 years now... and I'm still following it!
6Courtney-chanHon, it was always James from the beginning! We all knew it, Sy was just a distraction.
Brooke needs to put on her big girl panties and look at how she feels, no rules, or any other bullshit!
Side note, I think you've been working on this thing for 8 years now... and I'm still following it!
12/2/2010 c37 Crimson-Angel21
Haha I don't know if you remember me or not, but I've been a fan of this story since you started posting chapter one. Back when it appeared James and no chance in hell with Brooke. I just wanted you to know that I'm still here and enjoying your updates!
Haha I don't know if you remember me or not, but I've been a fan of this story since you started posting chapter one. Back when it appeared James and no chance in hell with Brooke. I just wanted you to know that I'm still here and enjoying your updates!