for At Last9/22/2002 c1 Elizabeth
hey! guess who finally found their way here! I would have commented on the other story, but you know, I was always ahead of the postings, so it was weird.
anyway, read your first chapter. I'm really impressed. you did the 3rd person thing really well. plus, your descriptiveness just blows me away. your beginnings are always so vivid, I love them. if only I could write like that...
hey! guess who finally found their way here! I would have commented on the other story, but you know, I was always ahead of the postings, so it was weird.
anyway, read your first chapter. I'm really impressed. you did the 3rd person thing really well. plus, your descriptiveness just blows me away. your beginnings are always so vivid, I love them. if only I could write like that...
9/22/2002 c1 
9Erilynne
Mel,
This is shaping up to be a cool story, though its pretty early so I can't really tell where its going at this time. This has a lot of potential, and I'd LOVE to find out more about "her majesty" That character is so cool! Just from Brooke and Jae's reaction to her I just know she's going to be a very evil villainess, and I love reading about them, however awful they may be. So, hurry up, write chapter 2, and if you get the time r/r my new short story, 'the edge'? (Sorry, had to plug it a bit, it only has 2 lonely little reviews)
zoe
9ErilynneMel,
This is shaping up to be a cool story, though its pretty early so I can't really tell where its going at this time. This has a lot of potential, and I'd LOVE to find out more about "her majesty" That character is so cool! Just from Brooke and Jae's reaction to her I just know she's going to be a very evil villainess, and I love reading about them, however awful they may be. So, hurry up, write chapter 2, and if you get the time r/r my new short story, 'the edge'? (Sorry, had to plug it a bit, it only has 2 lonely little reviews)
zoe