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4/29/2004 c1 Raiment
This is a great poem. passionate from end to end. It allows me to feel what the author feels. great work. keep it up.
10/10/2002 c1 36xo0Jayne0ox
This is a great poem ^^ My friend wrote a poem like this, and it reminds me of her so well.. (psst! Check out her stuff! She's on my fave authors list!) ^^ Not hinting or anything of course..

Thank you for reviewing my works, I hope to see more work from you in the future.

Regards,

-Jayne/x
9/22/2002 c1 21rainypromise
Hey, that was great! I especially like the last two lines "so I bleed within my soul as I look into your eyes" I really like those sentence, it touched me somewhere. I write poems, to and I'm desperate for reviews..*hint hint* LOL thanks.
9/22/2002 c1 10starsprinkles9604
I've never really been in any kind of relationship with a guy, but I do know that Love isn't fair...truer words were never spoken. Sweet poem...depressing yet oozes feeling. It's for real...I like it.
9/22/2002 c1 40GLow
i like how this is worded. very soulful like its coming from ur heart

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