for Mystic Moon8/19/2003 c20 
7MuseofMagic
I know 20 isn't a chapter but i had to review sumwhere... When are you going to write more chapter? It's just getting good and you stop writing am i going to have to bombard your email with letters that are annoying and repetitive? I hope not... ps. i took my story The Road Never Stops off for a bit i'm rewriting it.
~Muse~
7MuseofMagicI know 20 isn't a chapter but i had to review sumwhere... When are you going to write more chapter? It's just getting good and you stop writing am i going to have to bombard your email with letters that are annoying and repetitive? I hope not... ps. i took my story The Road Never Stops off for a bit i'm rewriting it.
~Muse~
7/20/2003 c2 7T.J. Strauss
Sorry it took me so long to review this. Well, it got started pretty fast, and seems to be skipping over things I would like to see. More description of the village would be nice, and I would think both of them would be a bit more curious/worried about this new world they've been stuck into. And are you aware that Tatooine is a very often-used planet in the Star Wars universe, or is this a crossover?
-T.J.-
7T.J. StraussSorry it took me so long to review this. Well, it got started pretty fast, and seems to be skipping over things I would like to see. More description of the village would be nice, and I would think both of them would be a bit more curious/worried about this new world they've been stuck into. And are you aware that Tatooine is a very often-used planet in the Star Wars universe, or is this a crossover?
-T.J.-
1/16/2003 c23 shade
nice and interesting story! I'll be waiting for your next chapter.
nice and interesting story! I'll be waiting for your next chapter.
12/21/2002 c1 Lady-Black-Moon
This is a great story! you make the transitions so well! You are doing excellent, and i'll be sure to read the rest of your story!
This is a great story! you make the transitions so well! You are doing excellent, and i'll be sure to read the rest of your story!
12/18/2002 c2 Naunet
okay, i guess i'll have to keep reading to find out about their powers, right? chapters are too short,dude!
okay, i guess i'll have to keep reading to find out about their powers, right? chapters are too short,dude!
11/20/2002 c3 Dopey
I know i said i would read this to the end but i really do have reading issues. I can't understand fantasy at all! i would love to help but all i can say is-don't make 2 many characters, 2 many lands, or 2 many problems, this always makes a story harder to understand. I can tell u have a talent for describing people and places (and making up names! i love these names!) its just i go for a much simpler story. So don't get me wrong its a good story i just don't think i can review much mroe
I know i said i would read this to the end but i really do have reading issues. I can't understand fantasy at all! i would love to help but all i can say is-don't make 2 many characters, 2 many lands, or 2 many problems, this always makes a story harder to understand. I can tell u have a talent for describing people and places (and making up names! i love these names!) its just i go for a much simpler story. So don't get me wrong its a good story i just don't think i can review much mroe
11/20/2002 c1 Dopey
Hi! you reviewed my story...um Half Knights (my sn was QueenoftheWorld then) i think. ANywho i just wanted to let u know that i will be discontinuing it due to lack of ideas (and realization of my lack of writing skills) however i am working on several other stories which i will be putting up soon so if you'd check my sn in like 3 weeks that'd be totally great of u. I'm not much a fantasy person but i'm reading this story to see if its any good. Will review thouroughly at the end. TATA!
Hi! you reviewed my story...um Half Knights (my sn was QueenoftheWorld then) i think. ANywho i just wanted to let u know that i will be discontinuing it due to lack of ideas (and realization of my lack of writing skills) however i am working on several other stories which i will be putting up soon so if you'd check my sn in like 3 weeks that'd be totally great of u. I'm not much a fantasy person but i'm reading this story to see if its any good. Will review thouroughly at the end. TATA!
11/12/2002 c9 1Yumemi
Yo! It's me again. It was kind late so I stopped on this chapter. It's really great, you know. I just whis a bit that you'd make it a tad bit less confusing. Things happen so fast that sometimes I just don't get what's happening.
Anyway, I haven't read all of it... whew! only a few more chapters to go...
Jaa!
1YumemiYo! It's me again. It was kind late so I stopped on this chapter. It's really great, you know. I just whis a bit that you'd make it a tad bit less confusing. Things happen so fast that sometimes I just don't get what's happening.
Anyway, I haven't read all of it... whew! only a few more chapters to go...
Jaa!
11/11/2002 c2 Yumemi
WOW! I'm just at chapter two and you alrady got me hooked! COOL! do continue! you just tickled my fantasy-loving bone! hehehe =(~_^)= I'm gonna read on...
oh yeah, sorry if I only managed to review now, lost our internet connection cause of phone trouble! anyways, expect more reviews from me!
Jaa!
WOW! I'm just at chapter two and you alrady got me hooked! COOL! do continue! you just tickled my fantasy-loving bone! hehehe =(~_^)= I'm gonna read on...
oh yeah, sorry if I only managed to review now, lost our internet connection cause of phone trouble! anyways, expect more reviews from me!
Jaa!
11/11/2002 c1 3Diljowan
cool story. i like it so far, i have not yet read it all. hey why did you email me though? dilven
3Diljowancool story. i like it so far, i have not yet read it all. hey why did you email me though? dilven
11/6/2002 c24 13RedLady
This is getting a little strange! Why does she have to be evil! She was cool! Too me! Oh well. Tell me when the next chapters are up and I will get to it eventually. I just have a lot of stuff going on sometimes and don't have time. Oh yeah, and don't be afraid to read at least ONE of my stories...
: )
13RedLadyThis is getting a little strange! Why does she have to be evil! She was cool! Too me! Oh well. Tell me when the next chapters are up and I will get to it eventually. I just have a lot of stuff going on sometimes and don't have time. Oh yeah, and don't be afraid to read at least ONE of my stories...
: )
11/6/2002 c20 RedLady
Who needs power levels? How come we just can't have people who have powers measured in the quality and not statistics like quantity. I don't know... it makes it seem less real and more like a game or something. But I'll go ahead and read the rest. At least you thought about how strong your characters are and how much they are growing...
Who needs power levels? How come we just can't have people who have powers measured in the quality and not statistics like quantity. I don't know... it makes it seem less real and more like a game or something. But I'll go ahead and read the rest. At least you thought about how strong your characters are and how much they are growing...