for The Fire in the Sky11/7/2002 c1 
55Fire of the Vampire
Yay! Kind of short but great nonetheless. I love it!
God Bless
Much Love
Later Daze
- Kacie
55Fire of the VampireYay! Kind of short but great nonetheless. I love it!
God Bless
Much Love
Later Daze
- Kacie
10/9/2002 c1 32RiddleSolved
wow, nice poem. it could be both about the sun, and a "picture" of something bad you've got past (?) and you can see a new beginning... GOOD! WELL DONE! I like poems like this one!
Please read and rewiew mine too... :) (i'm adding you to my fave. list!
32RiddleSolvedwow, nice poem. it could be both about the sun, and a "picture" of something bad you've got past (?) and you can see a new beginning... GOOD! WELL DONE! I like poems like this one!
Please read and rewiew mine too... :) (i'm adding you to my fave. list!
10/8/2002 c1 Wrong Name Tag
I like this one too ^_^ maybe not as much, but I still like it, hehe. I like the whole thing with giving creatures a new birth with the sun. Hehe, I also love the title, heh, but I'm just weird like that... Keep it up!
-Jessie
I like this one too ^_^ maybe not as much, but I still like it, hehe. I like the whole thing with giving creatures a new birth with the sun. Hehe, I also love the title, heh, but I'm just weird like that... Keep it up!
-Jessie
10/4/2002 c1 tk-lova
hey! i luuuuv the sun!...the sunrise, and the sunset are sooooo beautiful! it is sooo peaceful...but i also liek sitting out at night and watching the stars...there's sooo many...but...anyway, i also like rain...sry, just had to say that...hehehe. i reallly like this poem!...it has meaning...;-)
ttylata gata
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hey! i luuuuv the sun!...the sunrise, and the sunset are sooooo beautiful! it is sooo peaceful...but i also liek sitting out at night and watching the stars...there's sooo many...but...anyway, i also like rain...sry, just had to say that...hehehe. i reallly like this poem!...it has meaning...;-)
ttylata gata
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10/3/2002 c1 7Khalida
Good! I like this one... but... I don't like the sun so much as you seem to do. I'm a moon person.. can't ya tell? I like writing about the moon and other planets. I rarely write about the sun. It's just to hot and blistery for me. But that doesn't mean I don't like this poem! I like this poem a lot. It seems a little forced in the rhymes at times, but a lot better than before. You're improving, and it's good because you are becoming an even more awesome poet.
7KhalidaGood! I like this one... but... I don't like the sun so much as you seem to do. I'm a moon person.. can't ya tell? I like writing about the moon and other planets. I rarely write about the sun. It's just to hot and blistery for me. But that doesn't mean I don't like this poem! I like this poem a lot. It seems a little forced in the rhymes at times, but a lot better than before. You're improving, and it's good because you are becoming an even more awesome poet.