5/5/2004 c1 4Fumiko Ishihala
cute~ Nice descriptions of...everything... I can almost see it. Shonen-ai-ness of everything is kawaii. *GIGGLE* wtf *splurt*
cute~ Nice descriptions of...everything... I can almost see it. Shonen-ai-ness of everything is kawaii. *GIGGLE* wtf *splurt*
12/30/2002 c2 10Aki1
Wow. This story of yours is really cool, what with your colorful characters and the way you make this out...well, it's really nice, and I'll be looking forward to updates. Ja!
~Aki~
Wow. This story of yours is really cool, what with your colorful characters and the way you make this out...well, it's really nice, and I'll be looking forward to updates. Ja!
~Aki~
12/7/2002 c2 13Mayotan
The way you write is cool... I definitely would like to read more! But... *looks at update date* Don't take too long in updating, ne? *puppydog eyes* Ne, Ne, Ne? I think I like Kazuki! I think cinnamon rolls are the best ! *licks lips* Strawberry, chocolate, apple, cheese, blueberry, banana, original flavor, YUM YUM YUM!
The way you write is cool... I definitely would like to read more! But... *looks at update date* Don't take too long in updating, ne? *puppydog eyes* Ne, Ne, Ne? I think I like Kazuki! I think cinnamon rolls are the best ! *licks lips* Strawberry, chocolate, apple, cheese, blueberry, banana, original flavor, YUM YUM YUM!
11/25/2002 c2 Schala
Wai! I love your story, and I really love the characters ^^. But I think I like the story more... er... not sure ^^;; Maybe I just love them both equal ::nods:: ya thats it!
Hope ya right more though.
Wai! I love your story, and I really love the characters ^^. But I think I like the story more... er... not sure ^^;; Maybe I just love them both equal ::nods:: ya thats it!
Hope ya right more though.
11/9/2002 c2 Physco Draco
I'm so sorry it took me this long to read this chapter! It's just I'm overworked. Being a junior in high school, forming an anime club, writing, and just trying to have a life is hard work! Anyway, I love this new chapter.
I can't believe that he just licked the strawberry cinnammon finger! That just cracked me up. It kind of reminds me of crazy stunts I went through and still go through. Between you and me, people think I'm crazy in having an obsession with anime and love. Personally, you really have a wonderful style that you can just imagine it. Please write the next chapter soon. C-YA ^_^;;;
Hikaru - *Whispers in Fumi's ear* She's not herself today, must be the missing pudding...
Yami - *Caught red-headed eating pudding* Pudding? What pudding?
I'm so sorry it took me this long to read this chapter! It's just I'm overworked. Being a junior in high school, forming an anime club, writing, and just trying to have a life is hard work! Anyway, I love this new chapter.
I can't believe that he just licked the strawberry cinnammon finger! That just cracked me up. It kind of reminds me of crazy stunts I went through and still go through. Between you and me, people think I'm crazy in having an obsession with anime and love. Personally, you really have a wonderful style that you can just imagine it. Please write the next chapter soon. C-YA ^_^;;;
Hikaru - *Whispers in Fumi's ear* She's not herself today, must be the missing pudding...
Yami - *Caught red-headed eating pudding* Pudding? What pudding?
11/4/2002 c2 4YukaYuka
woot~! Oh, and in chan, there's no y. n_n;; Just thought you'ld like to know... YOU LIJE CINNAMON TOO? woot~! *dances around shaking cinnamon on everything edible~ n_n
woot~! Oh, and in chan, there's no y. n_n;; Just thought you'ld like to know... YOU LIJE CINNAMON TOO? woot~! *dances around shaking cinnamon on everything edible~ n_n
11/3/2002 c2 9r.mai
tee hee. LOVED the chapter... and i only noticed one annoying mistake... ^_^ third paragraph, after accidently 'skimming' welps, cya next chapter. ^_^ ja~! keep up da good work!
tee hee. LOVED the chapter... and i only noticed one annoying mistake... ^_^ third paragraph, after accidently 'skimming' welps, cya next chapter. ^_^ ja~! keep up da good work!
11/3/2002 c2 me
You updated! YAY! Please update again soon!
You updated! YAY! Please update again soon!
11/3/2002 c2 Yami Sakuma
OMGGGG! YOU'RE SO AWESOME FUMI-CHAN! (Tee-hee, my nicky for youy! LOL!)
By the way, you speak Japanese right? Can you tell me how to say "Vampire Spirit" in Japanese? I need it for a new ficcy I'm writing!
Thankies and CONTINUE! YOU'RE GREAT~!
OMGGGG! YOU'RE SO AWESOME FUMI-CHAN! (Tee-hee, my nicky for youy! LOL!)
By the way, you speak Japanese right? Can you tell me how to say "Vampire Spirit" in Japanese? I need it for a new ficcy I'm writing!
Thankies and CONTINUE! YOU'RE GREAT~!
10/16/2002 c1 Jen
More Chapters PLEASE! Good story!
More Chapters PLEASE! Good story!
9/28/2002 c1 r.mai
hey, i like the story so far...but...you switch tenses a lot... and it's REALLY annoying ... you're supposed to stick with one tense... ONE ... sorry if i seem harsh right about now ... i'm sorta irritated ... not ur fault ... my lil bro's. anywhom, keep on writing.. work on the tense thing, and i'll cya next chappie. ja~! ^_^
hey, i like the story so far...but...you switch tenses a lot... and it's REALLY annoying ... you're supposed to stick with one tense... ONE ... sorry if i seem harsh right about now ... i'm sorta irritated ... not ur fault ... my lil bro's. anywhom, keep on writing.. work on the tense thing, and i'll cya next chappie. ja~! ^_^