for The Love I Couldn't Release5/15/2003 c1 
10A Stranger In The Mirror
THE LOVE I COULDN'T RELEASE... just seeing the title made me want to read and review this poem of yours.. After all, who wouldn't be drawn to read this since the title kinda speaks for itself, right?
okay... the first thing that went into my mind as I read this was... Dude, what is going on with you as you were writing this? I mean, is this about getting over * or someone else in particular? Wohoo! Is it the guy from church you fancy? (toinkz! toinkz!)
Damn! How I totally wish I could write great poems like you do! It's just a curse in me... Keep the words flowing girl... You make girls like me (Margaret, Hazel, Isabella and Chynna) really proud of your works.. Be on the look-out.. I might be reviewing another poem of yours under another pen name..
Will I? Okay.. I'm Bluffing.. Tatah!
God Made Coke
God Made Pepsi
But When God Made Duncan and James
Damn! He Made Them Sexy
One Love,
Alyssa xx
10A Stranger In The MirrorTHE LOVE I COULDN'T RELEASE... just seeing the title made me want to read and review this poem of yours.. After all, who wouldn't be drawn to read this since the title kinda speaks for itself, right?
okay... the first thing that went into my mind as I read this was... Dude, what is going on with you as you were writing this? I mean, is this about getting over * or someone else in particular? Wohoo! Is it the guy from church you fancy? (toinkz! toinkz!)
Damn! How I totally wish I could write great poems like you do! It's just a curse in me... Keep the words flowing girl... You make girls like me (Margaret, Hazel, Isabella and Chynna) really proud of your works.. Be on the look-out.. I might be reviewing another poem of yours under another pen name..
Will I? Okay.. I'm Bluffing.. Tatah!
God Made Coke
God Made Pepsi
But When God Made Duncan and James
Damn! He Made Them Sexy
One Love,
Alyssa xx
11/6/2002 c1 kcididfnord
Oh, this is so sad ... this is exactly the way I've felt before, so I know the feeling! This is a very good poem. Sorry you've had to go through this.
Thanks for reviewing, by the way. ^_^ I won't be around much in November (I'm in a writing contest) but I'll try to review more of your work!
Oh, this is so sad ... this is exactly the way I've felt before, so I know the feeling! This is a very good poem. Sorry you've had to go through this.
Thanks for reviewing, by the way. ^_^ I won't be around much in November (I'm in a writing contest) but I'll try to review more of your work!
10/30/2002 c1 ThingBling
Ohhh! ::cries:: That's so sad! It sounds like you're had your share of heartbreaks.. ::pats blue-angel45 on the back:: I hope someday you'll write a really happy poem about finally getting your man!
^^ I still love your sad poems, too.. so wonderful!
-ThingBling
Ohhh! ::cries:: That's so sad! It sounds like you're had your share of heartbreaks.. ::pats blue-angel45 on the back:: I hope someday you'll write a really happy poem about finally getting your man!
^^ I still love your sad poems, too.. so wonderful!
-ThingBling
10/17/2002 c1 3Lunaraine
can't release your love... awww... it was still beatiful! shows a great sign of hope! kewl dude! tee hee! ^_^
3Lunarainecan't release your love... awww... it was still beatiful! shows a great sign of hope! kewl dude! tee hee! ^_^