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59condemned Hope
You have really done a good job with this.
I also have written a poem called "Why", it's about death.
59condemned HopeYou have really done a good job with this.
I also have written a poem called "Why", it's about death.
9/30/2002 c1 220Namir Swiftpaw
VERY nice. The only thing is with this line...
"What?
Temps you..."
"Temps" should be "tempts". ;P Probably just a typo, and that's okay! It happens. ^^;
...I wrote a poem called "Why" as well, but it had a very different message. Funny how poems can do that, eh?
Keep it up.
~Namir Swiftpaw
220Namir SwiftpawVERY nice. The only thing is with this line...
"What?
Temps you..."
"Temps" should be "tempts". ;P Probably just a typo, and that's okay! It happens. ^^;
...I wrote a poem called "Why" as well, but it had a very different message. Funny how poems can do that, eh?
Keep it up.
~Namir Swiftpaw
9/30/2002 c1 17La Solange
this is such beautiful poetry. simple and beautiful. Keep it up!
~faerie flame
17La Solangethis is such beautiful poetry. simple and beautiful. Keep it up!
~faerie flame