for Blurring The Line10/3/2005 c1 facebookstalker
Wow, I really enjoy your writting style and diologue. ^_^ Keep up the great work! Peace!
Wow, I really enjoy your writting style and diologue. ^_^ Keep up the great work! Peace!
6/28/2005 c3 
26lslines
O.O Femme-slash! *glomptacklehugs* It's not corny, it's not cheesy, and you had better update soon!
26lslinesO.O Femme-slash! *glomptacklehugs* It's not corny, it's not cheesy, and you had better update soon!
8/22/2004 c2 4BlueRyu
Once again I love the description, but I didn't like how you changed the perspective. I think it should be one or the other.
4BlueRyuOnce again I love the description, but I didn't like how you changed the perspective. I think it should be one or the other.
7/9/2004 c1 31kalmia raphael
aaw. short, sweet, kept my attention throughout ^^ for some reason i like it when she said 'soft'...
just avoid spelling errors... hehe, like clam instead of calm...
nice. reading more.
~ kal
(R&R back? ^^)
31kalmia raphaelaaw. short, sweet, kept my attention throughout ^^ for some reason i like it when she said 'soft'...
just avoid spelling errors... hehe, like clam instead of calm...
nice. reading more.
~ kal
(R&R back? ^^)
3/28/2004 c3 40H. Moth
this the first f/f story i ever read, but i really like it! all except for danny, who is the scum of the earth!
wait! i have a friend named danny...oh well. i'm sure he deserves that title as well, for something or other. update soon with 'the talk'!
40H. Moththis the first f/f story i ever read, but i really like it! all except for danny, who is the scum of the earth!
wait! i have a friend named danny...oh well. i'm sure he deserves that title as well, for something or other. update soon with 'the talk'!
1/30/2004 c3 5Ticcies
Wow...I hope that's not the end! I wanna know what happens with Bay and Liss. It's a really interesting concept, having a pregnant girlfriend. I like this. There's the spelling errors like every other decent human being, lol, but other than that, it's good. I need to know what happens!
5TicciesWow...I hope that's not the end! I wanna know what happens with Bay and Liss. It's a really interesting concept, having a pregnant girlfriend. I like this. There's the spelling errors like every other decent human being, lol, but other than that, it's good. I need to know what happens!
10/12/2003 c1 41DarkLove
dang this is really good. keep up the good work. i want a second chapter. please. ttyl
41DarkLovedang this is really good. keep up the good work. i want a second chapter. please. ttyl
8/21/2003 c3 Kristy
I like it...alot..hopefully u'll update!
I like it...alot..hopefully u'll update!
8/16/2003 c3 8chogranger
Really good!
You should keep going, please! And possibly with a *happy* ending(?)
P.S.-My name's Bailey and that scared the hell out of me at first. :)
8chograngerReally good!
You should keep going, please! And possibly with a *happy* ending(?)
P.S.-My name's Bailey and that scared the hell out of me at first. :)
8/15/2003 c3 6Alexs O
Hey there!
This story was really good and awesome! I really liked it. You should keep up the really good work. Update soon! I can’t wait to read the next part.
~alex boi
6Alexs OHey there!
This story was really good and awesome! I really liked it. You should keep up the really good work. Update soon! I can’t wait to read the next part.
~alex boi
5/12/2003 c3 2Aryaveiel Skycryer
This is pretty good, but after reading other people's fiction my standards are very high indeed. Fix up the spelling errors and it would be very good.
2Aryaveiel SkycryerThis is pretty good, but after reading other people's fiction my standards are very high indeed. Fix up the spelling errors and it would be very good.
2/27/2003 c3 4ForeverPained
good story.really angsty.u could have a little more description tho.otherwise its a really cool story..can't wait to read more
4ForeverPainedgood story.really angsty.u could have a little more description tho.otherwise its a really cool story..can't wait to read more
12/14/2002 c3 4seethelight05
i really like ur story i hope u continue on with it its one of the better storys i have read good job
4seethelight05i really like ur story i hope u continue on with it its one of the better storys i have read good job