for The Anisapiens12/13/2002 c1 
15x-Laurie-x
That was really cool and original! I've never heard of anything like that before. I wonder if scientists will ever make a chemical which could turn you into an Anisapien... hmmm... I really like the last line; "Make each day an adventure, because, for me, it might very well be my last." That's true if you an Anisapien or human. :o)
15x-Laurie-xThat was really cool and original! I've never heard of anything like that before. I wonder if scientists will ever make a chemical which could turn you into an Anisapien... hmmm... I really like the last line; "Make each day an adventure, because, for me, it might very well be my last." That's true if you an Anisapien or human. :o)
11/12/2002 c1 1dustywind
Your style is a very refreshing one but your plot seems a little like that book Animorphs. I suppose you were inspired by that plot. Your phrasing is good and keeps the readers in suspense. Keep up the good work.
1dustywindYour style is a very refreshing one but your plot seems a little like that book Animorphs. I suppose you were inspired by that plot. Your phrasing is good and keeps the readers in suspense. Keep up the good work.
11/8/2002 c1 Ivy Island
Okay, thats kinda weird.. It's good and it's an interesting idea. You might want to think about writing a sequal, there is still more you could do with this story. Great writing!
Okay, thats kinda weird.. It's good and it's an interesting idea. You might want to think about writing a sequal, there is still more you could do with this story. Great writing!
10/2/2002 c1 ViperBoy
Hi, Cool story , Just wanted to say thanks for your review of my HP story "Oh brother where art thou", Your review inspired me to write chapter 2, I'm workin on it at the moment :)thnx viperboy
Hi, Cool story , Just wanted to say thanks for your review of my HP story "Oh brother where art thou", Your review inspired me to write chapter 2, I'm workin on it at the moment :)thnx viperboy
10/1/2002 c1 60dollface and her cancer
It's good; I like the idea. Anisapien was a clever word to come up with. Some of the wording might be a bit off, or maybe it's just me, but all in all, I like it!
60dollface and her cancerIt's good; I like the idea. Anisapien was a clever word to come up with. Some of the wording might be a bit off, or maybe it's just me, but all in all, I like it!