for People Suck10/7/2002 c1 
7Silver Midnight
All right, Ci! Go you! It's not completely *prefect*... but what poem is? I like the emotion and energy that's behind it. You're showing a fresh and completely honest view of what you think.
Now, for the part even I don't like: CRITISM. You need to find your 'style'. Don't worry, that comes in time. Next, you seem to be a tad choppy. You need to have it flow more. Once again, that comes in time. Other than that... it's pretty good! ~S.M.
7Silver MidnightAll right, Ci! Go you! It's not completely *prefect*... but what poem is? I like the emotion and energy that's behind it. You're showing a fresh and completely honest view of what you think.
Now, for the part even I don't like: CRITISM. You need to find your 'style'. Don't worry, that comes in time. Next, you seem to be a tad choppy. You need to have it flow more. Once again, that comes in time. Other than that... it's pretty good! ~S.M.