for Build It Up, Tear It Down2/10/2008 c10 Haru
Oh my that was such a good story! You have to keep writing it I loved it and I want to see what happens to Mari and everyone! It was so incredibly cute I loved it!
Oh my that was such a good story! You have to keep writing it I loved it and I want to see what happens to Mari and everyone! It was so incredibly cute I loved it!
6/24/2007 c10 
3Back of Beyond
Amazing story, with such a sad ending to chapter 10! Shame you've never continued this...
3Back of BeyondAmazing story, with such a sad ending to chapter 10! Shame you've never continued this...
6/26/2005 c1 19Cookie Gestapo
In the beginning this storie confused me. How it was written was un organized. Everything mushed together.
But by the end of the storie I feel in love with it. Your wrighting progressed over time. I could see the changes in each chapter as your wrighting got better and better.
I feel sad that you havent updated in nearly three years.
It's quite disturbing.
I wish oyu would though. Update I mean. I love how your characters grew. I wish I could continue to see them grow.
Was that the end? I hope it wasnt. It was so...in complete.
19Cookie GestapoIn the beginning this storie confused me. How it was written was un organized. Everything mushed together.
But by the end of the storie I feel in love with it. Your wrighting progressed over time. I could see the changes in each chapter as your wrighting got better and better.
I feel sad that you havent updated in nearly three years.
It's quite disturbing.
I wish oyu would though. Update I mean. I love how your characters grew. I wish I could continue to see them grow.
Was that the end? I hope it wasnt. It was so...in complete.
4/9/2005 c10 m damian e l
Shit, that's depressing. This story is actually really good. I'm a little tragedy obsessed. I can't help but think she would be found and returned anyways? Adoption agencies are all about the law and Sebs father is an ass. I don't doubt he would do it. I couldn't read your chapter notes. It gives me a headache because I have to read 10 times slower, so sorry if it said anything I should have read. Anyway, good job, thanks for writing this I really liked it.
Shit, that's depressing. This story is actually really good. I'm a little tragedy obsessed. I can't help but think she would be found and returned anyways? Adoption agencies are all about the law and Sebs father is an ass. I don't doubt he would do it. I couldn't read your chapter notes. It gives me a headache because I have to read 10 times slower, so sorry if it said anything I should have read. Anyway, good job, thanks for writing this I really liked it.
8/9/2004 c10 6Athena Coffey
That can not be the last chapter. I hope not. You have to continue, please? Look, I even put you on my favorites so please continue soon. For me?
6Athena CoffeyThat can not be the last chapter. I hope not. You have to continue, please? Look, I even put you on my favorites so please continue soon. For me?
12/11/2003 c10 16Germaine Amundsen
*teary eyes*
but...but... what?
oh, it's so incredibly fucked up! like, in a completely good way because you are ~so~ one of my favorite authors. I'm unbelievably happy to read your originals, because your fanfics are awesome, too. I'm a big fan of yours! /_^
Oh... you may remember me as Dark Peppermint... but probably not.
ANYWAY! Yeah. I'm totally in love with this story, so I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. The whole thing's just lovely!
16Germaine Amundsen*teary eyes*
but...but... what?
oh, it's so incredibly fucked up! like, in a completely good way because you are ~so~ one of my favorite authors. I'm unbelievably happy to read your originals, because your fanfics are awesome, too. I'm a big fan of yours! /_^
Oh... you may remember me as Dark Peppermint... but probably not.
ANYWAY! Yeah. I'm totally in love with this story, so I'm really looking forward to the next chapter. The whole thing's just lovely!
11/25/2003 c10 3Dlyope
I love your story. Very typical in a sense that it's a common storyline but still good.
3DlyopeI love your story. Very typical in a sense that it's a common storyline but still good.
7/17/2003 c1 21apathyburger
"but note that they are *not* your Daddy, and you are not on our level. I don't even know why you show your face at school."
WHAT? Wait, I think? Maybe I get it. I could just be thick. Yes, that could be it.
"Shopping, for my punker prostitute, the one with all the attitude and spunk and smarts."
That is quite possibly the coolest line ever, way up there with "Peachy! Why shouldn't I be? The world's my oyster, except for the fact that I just rammed a wooden stake in my brother's heart because he turned into a vampire, even though I don't believe in vampires. Aside from that unfortunate business, everything's hunky-dory." (From Dusk Till Dawn) But I'll stop now
21apathyburger"but note that they are *not* your Daddy, and you are not on our level. I don't even know why you show your face at school."
WHAT? Wait, I think? Maybe I get it. I could just be thick. Yes, that could be it.
"Shopping, for my punker prostitute, the one with all the attitude and spunk and smarts."
That is quite possibly the coolest line ever, way up there with "Peachy! Why shouldn't I be? The world's my oyster, except for the fact that I just rammed a wooden stake in my brother's heart because he turned into a vampire, even though I don't believe in vampires. Aside from that unfortunate business, everything's hunky-dory." (From Dusk Till Dawn) But I'll stop now
3/24/2003 c10 redredredred
wait, wait, wait! this is finished? it was so good, but i doesn't feel finsihed, di dyou just give the rest up? ;_; well, i hope you pick it up again, it's so pretty!
wait, wait, wait! this is finished? it was so good, but i doesn't feel finsihed, di dyou just give the rest up? ;_; well, i hope you pick it up again, it's so pretty!
1/29/2003 c10 3lostgirl
I really really like this story, and I'm no sure where I found it, but yay for me, or you for writing it, or something. I really love Hayden and Seb, and awwww baby, and wha's wih the cryptic plan, and I shouldn't be leaving reviews when I haven't slept in three days becase of exams and, and, way too much coffee.
Right, sorry, story. Yes, I like the charectirizations, and the, the, the, stuff. Sorry for the schizoness. Bye. Yeah.
3lostgirlI really really like this story, and I'm no sure where I found it, but yay for me, or you for writing it, or something. I really love Hayden and Seb, and awwww baby, and wha's wih the cryptic plan, and I shouldn't be leaving reviews when I haven't slept in three days becase of exams and, and, way too much coffee.
Right, sorry, story. Yes, I like the charectirizations, and the, the, the, stuff. Sorry for the schizoness. Bye. Yeah.