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6/9/2003 c1 98Not Just a Little Girl
WOW this is brilliantly written, and the formatting really enhances the effect!
12/4/2002 c1 1Emryald
Ooh, I love it! *squee!*
10/14/2002 c1 2Catalina Royce
Hmm...Go and submit it in your magazine. You seem to know what's good and what isn't. Perhaps, though, with the bold, in your 2nd last stanza, you could higlight the "Destroyed"...
10/10/2002 c1 8BlackDragon7
really good poem
10/5/2002 c1 Wrong Name Tag
Awesome poem, I really like the last stanza. Excellent job!

-Jessie
10/2/2002 c1 6Toad-Frog
Written very well! Good job! Read mine sometime and keep on writing!

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