for Peace Flowing9/1/2004 c1 Sapphire Midnight
This is superb! You know that...right?
This is superb! You know that...right?
11/9/2003 c1 
14Caffiene Addict
I love it. It's beautiful.
Only one thing, you might want to change the "thy" to "the". It seems a little awkward. Not a criticism, merely a suggestion.
Love the poem, it really is beautiful.
PS - You're on my favorite authors list
14Caffiene AddictI love it. It's beautiful.
Only one thing, you might want to change the "thy" to "the". It seems a little awkward. Not a criticism, merely a suggestion.
Love the poem, it really is beautiful.
PS - You're on my favorite authors list
11/19/2002 c1 8deathsoup
Beautifully written. The imagery is serene, soothing, it reminds me of my grandmother's house in New York. Nice.
8deathsoupBeautifully written. The imagery is serene, soothing, it reminds me of my grandmother's house in New York. Nice.
11/11/2002 c1 Sapphire Midnight
Oh! Cool! that is such a neat poem! It has great meaning, in a nice and calm, serene way. I love it! Keep up the good work ol' buddy ol' friend!
Oh! Cool! that is such a neat poem! It has great meaning, in a nice and calm, serene way. I love it! Keep up the good work ol' buddy ol' friend!
11/5/2002 c1 1Ash Faerie
It's great! Even though you change your rhythm constantly, you retained the flow. Keeping the flow in this style of poetry can be difficult sometimes. A beautiful poem.
Obviously, I'm now a member of Fanfiction, so yes, I read your e-mail and responded, Gaby.
-Maddy-
1Ash FaerieIt's great! Even though you change your rhythm constantly, you retained the flow. Keeping the flow in this style of poetry can be difficult sometimes. A beautiful poem.
Obviously, I'm now a member of Fanfiction, so yes, I read your e-mail and responded, Gaby.
-Maddy-
10/2/2002 c1 56AsianScaper
i found the 'thy' rather misplaced since it seems to be the only one there. but it's a flurry of picture, this poem of yours and a blur of changing views as well as sound, if you can believe such a claim. i can hear it, with wind nibbling at my ears. =P incredible.
56AsianScaperi found the 'thy' rather misplaced since it seems to be the only one there. but it's a flurry of picture, this poem of yours and a blur of changing views as well as sound, if you can believe such a claim. i can hear it, with wind nibbling at my ears. =P incredible.