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9/1/2004 c1 Sapphire Midnight
This is superb! You know that...right?
11/9/2003 c1 14Caffiene Addict
I love it. It's beautiful.

Only one thing, you might want to change the "thy" to "the". It seems a little awkward. Not a criticism, merely a suggestion.

Love the poem, it really is beautiful.

PS - You're on my favorite authors list
2/1/2003 c1 17Shinmogri
Such imagery and flow! Simply wonderful.
11/22/2002 c1 100Keep it 100
Beautiful. Truely peaceful...

~Heart of the Sword
11/19/2002 c1 8deathsoup
Beautifully written. The imagery is serene, soothing, it reminds me of my grandmother's house in New York. Nice.
11/11/2002 c1 Sapphire Midnight
Oh! Cool! that is such a neat poem! It has great meaning, in a nice and calm, serene way. I love it! Keep up the good work ol' buddy ol' friend!
11/5/2002 c1 1Ash Faerie
It's great! Even though you change your rhythm constantly, you retained the flow. Keeping the flow in this style of poetry can be difficult sometimes. A beautiful poem.

Obviously, I'm now a member of Fanfiction, so yes, I read your e-mail and responded, Gaby.

-Maddy-
10/3/2002 c1 22Gevo
just one word: beautiful
10/2/2002 c1 56AsianScaper
i found the 'thy' rather misplaced since it seems to be the only one there. but it's a flurry of picture, this poem of yours and a blur of changing views as well as sound, if you can believe such a claim. i can hear it, with wind nibbling at my ears. =P incredible.

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