To Som: Thank you for reviewing my first poem! I really appreciated your kindness in doing so. Your motivation had made me decided to continue (even though I am still not that good in writing) whenever inspiration had hit my head. Because I knew, even when nobody wanted to read my lousy work, there is always SOM to let me know she is reading! ^_^
AN ORDEAL
Found myself in total darkness
Felt my partners piled above me
For what reason was they cold and intact
For what reason I was the only survivor
My instinct told me to wriggle my way up
No matter how disrespectful I had to be
Using them as my stepping stones
Up, up and above was where I headed
Until the first trace of light shone on me
Found myself in total brightness
Felt my partners stacked below me
For what reason was they cold and intact
For what reason I was the only survivor
My instinct told me to find my way back
No matter how pessimistic I had to be
With no more chemical trace to lead me on
North South East West were the directions I've wandered
Only to find myself back to where I've started
North South East West were the directions I've wandered again
That was an ordeal I've to accept
To be the only survivor in this massacre