Chocolate
Hot tears stream down her face
Walking down the hall, she quickens her pace
Bursting through the door
She slows the inner war
Peace is near
There's nothing to fear
She reaches for the purple package
Brown stains marks her hands like a badge
Oh this brown fruit's seed!
So much better than weed(Or "Just what any girl needs")
Its soft flavor bites her tongue - as her tears stop

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Chocolate is the seed of a fruit right? I'm sure I've read that somewhere... And I've never tried weed but I'm sure chocolate is better! At least to us girls! ;) Which line sounds better for line 10? "So much better than weed" or "Just what any girl needs"?