I've been learning Japanese for about half a year but still I'm not able to write a good poem in this language (been learning French at school for almost two years and can't write something making sense either!). I haven't got the faintest idea if this is correct grammar at all. Sorry about that. I counted the syllables twice and had to change some words but I guess now it's right (5-7-5). If not, I'd like to know... (hint!)

Enjoy, even if it's quite short.

tenki

ame ga furu.

hi wa arimasen.

zannen ne.

weather

it's raining.

there's no sun.

it's a pity, isn't it.