A/n: Glad your interested in this..story...well, as I said in my summary, I wrote this.. in fifth grade.. (at the age of 10).so, flames are welcome. And oh yeaH! One more thing.. I don't really know which category this story fits Please HELP! Ack, I should've posted this on .o well..Anyways, here goes...

Snowflake

One cold winter night, on Christmas Eve an old man was walking on the dirty street, he was cold and tired. He had been walking for 2 days without any food. This was a new town to him. And he's been walking on the streets of this new town for a hour.

Finally, his legs can't take anymore so they slowly fell down to the ground with a thump. The pair of legs did not move for a long time. They just stayed there, so still, on the cold cold ground.

Suddenly, something dropped onto his old stiffed legs. He looked down and saw a small snowflake on one of his legs. Without warning a powerful light blasted into the air. Thousands of snowflakes came tumbling down the sky. There were big ones and small ones.

They all swifted down and landed on the old man's head.

Then before his eyes can blink, a cloud appeared in front of him. Four other clouds followed behind, each one one step closer to the sky.

Because he was a very curious man he took a big step onto the first cloud. Light rushed down in front of him. Something glimmered on top of the cloud but he couldn't see because the light that zapped down was so powerful, it blinded his eyes. It was as if looking into the sun. But somehow, later he managed to see what was on the cloud.

And on there was a word. He took a deep breath and a deep scent of fragrance rushed into his nose. "Fragrant" he read softly as the wind started to blow him toward the next cloud.

So he stepped onto the second one. The same thing happened but there was a different word this time. The word was "Pure" .

He kept on reading and read as he stepped on each cloud. There was paradise, peace, and kindness. When he was going to the last cloud he looked up and saw a huge gate. A strong light was coming from that gate.

Taking a deep breath he slowly took his leg and stepped on the final cloud. Without warning, a light started to circle him and later stars danced around him, circling him, flying circles around him. Then, huge packs of butterflies joined in making a heart in front, back, side top of him. They worked together making a heart, with nine butterflies on each.

Huge cranes flew in then, with their delicate beaks they pulled him up into the air and flew him over a golden, shiny gate. When the pair of cranes dropped him onto soft landing, he looked around and saw a lot of people. They were all nice to him and he lived happily behind that golden fence.

Ever single year he and a lot of other people would bring peace to Planet Earth and all creatures and people would be happy.

THE END! =D