Hey I had to write this for our poetry unit in English and my teacher said it was really good. I'd like to know what you think about it. Sorry if it sucks! I'd like to know you're thoughts on it. Thank you!

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The rain falls like tears,

From the heavenly angels,

They're weeping for us.

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So. how'd you like it? Please review and tell me! Thanks so much!

Love,

Luckynumba7