Hey ho peeps. I thought that I should just give you some insight on this piece.. However I cant seem to remember what I was going to tell you. UGH! I hate it when that happens! Um well Yeah. errrr OH! Lol okies I'v been writing thins for awhile it started in 7th grade and seeing that I'm in 9th hehe. well ya the prolog has been written this year, but the chapter 1 and so on. well u get the point. So what im trying to say is that the writing grows better in time! Oh ya! Hehe if anyone has ever read the Saga: Artifacts of Power by Maggie Furey (which includes: Aurian, Harp of Winds, The Sword of flames, and Dhiammara),I'm pretty sure you will like this story! I got some of my ideas from it. I admit it! But still its still my story and most every thing other than some concepts are mine. All mine! Well just thought I should tell you! Oh almost forgot, I made up my own language and It should be apparent what the Elves are saying but if you have any questions feel free to ask!

Well get reading!

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Anya stood in the middle of them all. Listening to the foreign tongue yet could understand everything. She looked around here and smiled. 'Yes this is going to be a good time' she thought as she looked around at the long and slim faces. The gorgeous beings that they were, they could also be dangerous and sly. Her hooded cloak still on after their fast journey. She knew that there was more of a reason for being here other than that Lady Salvia wanted company.

Someone was moving through the crowd and the others were moving gracefully out of their way. Anya looked at the intruder. They were dressed beautifully, with a flowing gown and a graceful hand holding an elegantly carved maple staff with a green gem glowing from the top. Anya could only assume that this was Ewárna the Queen of the Elves.

"Mé vates comiz lo" Ewárna said directly to Lady Salvia and Anya. Her Voice was like rain falling gently on a leaf. With all of her grace and beauty Anya sat there petrified. She understood but could not move a muscle. Lady Salvia grabbed her arm and pulled her to her feet and both Elf-Mage and Mage walked up to the Elvin Queen.

"Asl?," Ewárna beckoned, and they followed obediently. They followed her through an ached tree's root and up marble stairs to a stream that went through a tree's trunk and they sat down. No one was around to be seen and there was something about this place that made Anya feel safer and that some magic source was protecting it.

"Now that we are in private we can speak in Common," Ewárna's voice was still smooth and clear but the music was gone. "Tell me Lady Salvia, how is your father doing?" She addressed.

"Quite fine thank you." Lady Salvia was replying. Her face was paler than usual and Anya was about to ask her if she was ok when she heard a voice in her head that was strong and powerful.

"Hello Anya." It was a terrible voice with a piercing stare, yet no one could be seen looking at her. "Do not be afraid I am in front of you." Anya looked at the Queen and saw that her eyes were looking at me yet her face was turned toward Lady Salvia, listening to her. Anya shifted in her spot. Her thoughts not showing on her face yet cold sweat trickled down the back of her neck. Soon Ewárna turned to Anya and turned her full attention on her.

"So tell me, Anya, how did you come to be found by our good Archmage?" Her voice was pleasant but somehow there was bitterness there. Her eyes and face gave nothing away. 'She seemed to be mad that I lived. Why?' Anya pondered over this but could make not head or tail of it.

"The story is long." She blushed as she spoke. No one had ever asked her what her story had been when L'arvan found her, and she was not sure that she wanted to tell it to this elfin stranger. "However, I will tell it to please you." Anya began to recite her story to the Elvin Queen.


Ok, ok I know. It was really short but that's just how long it is so deal with it! Don't worry next chappie should be longer ^_~. No really it will be a lot longer! I don't mind constructive criticism as long as it doesn't cus me out. HEHE actually I don't really mind. If u want to send flames, be my guest. But when u do im just going to laugh at it. which practically means im laughing at you, so if you like to be laughed at well then go ahead; however, if you don't want to be laughed at and don't want everyone to know how stupidly funny your review is then I suggest you dont. Im only talking annoying flames that say im stupid and all I LOVE constructive criticism! I love ANY type of Reviews, though! I really like it when people give me help, and tell me what they think about my story! So ya send reviews, short or long (preferable), nice or mean, helpful or not. Just send them! They can be one word for all I care! Haha well I would like something more than that but I welcome anything!

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