Ignored

A fly on the wall,
Sits, both patiently and still,
Unnoticed by all.

A/N:
This is my first attempt on a haiku. To be honest, I know nothing about
them!
Please R&R! Flame if you want.

Alternative:

A fly on the wall,
Sits still, unwilling to fall,
Unnoticed by all.

A/N:
Is the alternative better? Please R&R! Tell me . . . thx!
Don't forget to read the next chapter!
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