Hi. I'm a rookie, but I want all the help I can get. Constructive criticism is more than welcome. Thanks.

Dreamer

I wish to be free of this world,

This world and all it's boundaries;

To not have to work waiting tables

For a petty salary.

But this does not matter

As much as it should,

For I am a Dreamer

And if I had a choice I still would.

My feet confine me

Would that I had fins

To swim in the ocean

My scaled tail would bend.

Gravity confines me,

I want to leap high.

Oh, and I so want to

Fly into the night sky.

To see other planets,

And all the Milky Way,

And if I were to come back,

Everyone would say:

"There is a dreamer

Who made her dreams comes true

Now I have confidence

To make mine real, too."

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