I tend to write a lot of my poetry during school, mostly during my Psychology and Chemistry classes. This is no different. Please review, I appreciate it.

Prince of my Heart

My tears run scarlet,

Streaming down my weather-beaten face

As I stand by your body,

I talk to your departed soul

Telling you how much I love you,

You can't hear me anymore

My feelings rush out in a waterfall,

Cascading are these feelings that weren't said before

I wish I'd told you, I should have, I think

As I place my hands on your bloody face

I feel naught but sorrow

I kneel over your body,

Your nose, your eyes… your lips

Those lips that I shall never know

Those piercing eyes that shall never see again

I cry as I imagine the "if"s

The crown prince of my heart

Is now lost forever to the abyss

Please review… and be honest.