ok well I have no idea where this story is going, but I thought I would post it just to see what you all think. . .

Thunder clouds rolled in and the sky darkened menacingly. Below a river flowed, now

raging wildly from the gusts of wind that blew in from the west. Before long the rain came,

first a light shower, but soon turning in to a torrential down pore. A lone figure struggled

along, the wind almost bending the frail figure. As the storm raged on the figure pushed on.

Up ahead there was a glimmer of light, the figure headed eagerly toward it.