First Snow
The whirling flurries, winter's leaves
whispering through the morning's quiet
purple dawn now touched by crystals
glitter, glitter, bejeweled feathers
sinking softly through bare branches
clustering on the slanted rooftops
children's laughter, distant, distant,
echoing in the silent cold
a kitten's pawprints hidden, hidden,
across a blanket of purest white
reds of autumn trees' shed coats
lay down beneath it, somewhere covered
drifting, drifting, down from heaven
tears of starlight, first day's snow.
Author's Ramblings:
Yet another poem done for my English 9 Honours class; this time we had to write about the first snow of the year. Oddly, this is probably the best poem I've ever done, even though the topic isn't what I'd usually choose to write about. I think one of the best aspects of it is that although it doesn't rhyme, it almost feels like it does when you read it. Make sense? Anyways, please review! (and I'll review one of your stories and/or poems in return!)