Wow, it's been quite some time since I last about that if anyone still wanted to read my stuff, but I have a few new poems I'd like to post up.

you don't see me, alone, over here

as you brood over him and what to do

sadness, like an egg in an overwhelming sea of off-white

you don't see me, while you argue with him

you don't feel me, while you worry

about him

and you don't seem to notice

when i leave with a cracked voice

and saltwater eyes

to lull myself to sleep

with thin voices through the radio

but how could you?

you're worried about him

you don't see me when our portrait cracks

and i fall away

underneath you, inferior

underneath him, inferior

you don't see me, alone, over there

So how was it?Please review. Constructive criticism is appreciated, just not too harsh.