They say a wish upon a shooting star
Will magic'ly be granted from afar;
Some demi-god that lives in Star-land there
Will send your heart's desire through the air.
But what kind of a demi-god would deign
To grant a wish wished on a shooting plane?
I'm having some trouble with the wording/rhythm, so any and all suggestions on this one would be most appreciated, as ever. Thanks, luvs!