Having another go at poetry. Angst again I'm afraid. Tell me what you think.

Two Halves For A Sister

Sweetly sleep sad sister,

Sleep, don't wait for dark,

As your life smokes out to cinder,

Don't hang on to satisfy my heart

Dream and close those eyes,

Shut out the pain around.

Sister, believe my well-meant lies

Go to where the deepest sleep is found

Of course I'll miss you sister,

O God, don't snatch her life away-

No-Leave now-no more shall this pain fester

Go-Ignore me, wind you own sweet way,

Finally find your cure and that elusive painless day.