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Sunset; the days begun
Bright red lights are screaming through the
Night light
A softer glow, comforts and protects them while they're
Sleeping
I am at rest,
'til daybreak and the shadows
Flee away
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Moonbeam; the dark of night
Shows the way to all those who would
Seeker
Of ancient truth, echoes in the semblance of
Tomorrow
Eternal star
Hold the flame the light will lead
The way
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Daybreak; the answers free
Bright white light that fill this empty
Rumors
That shake the earth. Deceit and lies that bring us to our
Knee jerk
Reaction, too
Even a child is know by the work
To do
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Twilight; the rain will fall
The sun will fade, the shadows come from hiding
Some other key
You know the way
You've seen it in your mind
Now, you are at rest
'til daybreak and the shadows
Flee away
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A/N: So, what do you think? Which is better?