2Hello everybody, I'm starting my very first story ( yah ). I know it's short but the other chapters will be longer I promise. I never wrote a story before so go easy on me but I do enjoy critism. Also as a warning this is slash which means male x male relationships so if this is a homophone or just don't like slash stories then click the back button and don't read the story. And don't flame the story if you don't like it either because nobody pushing a gun to your head or something and making you read it. Okay now on to the story, enjoy.
.Movie Theater Love.
.Chapter One.
.The Begginning.
'Salvation wake up, time for work' is the thing I hear every single fucking morning from my roommate Ryan. Since I too lazy to go to the store and buy a alarm clock he's been waking me up every morning in the last year after I lost my job at the gocery store for being late seven days in a row. I cannot afford to lose another job.
So after I finally rolled out of bed and landed hard on my bedroom floor I crawled to my bathroom and quickly brushed my teeth and washed my face, then I took a five minute shower and got dressed in a black Bullet For My Valentine shirt and a pair of faded blue jeans. Then I quickly comed my black & red hair then walked out of the bathroom only to be greeted by my roommate Ryan who was dressed in an black shirt that said 'i do whatever my rice crispies tell me to do' and a pair of black pants. 'Ready to go roommie' he said a stupid grin plastered onto his face. 'yeah, sure' I mumbled slipping on my shoes and heading out of our apartment door Ryan behind me singing As The Lines Between Machinery And Humanity Blurs by Atreyu quietly to himself, 'every thought catalyst reaction nerve synapse, mentally slavery disembodied, contralled minds sharpened tools, bloody knives electric chips, machine contralled boy to your master, your minds not yours'. 'Ry stop singing you suck at it' I told Ryan opening and getting into the passanger seat of his car closing the door as I sat down. 'yeah well wait until the day I become a famous rockstar Salvation and beside it's not like you sing any better' Ry replied starting up the car and heading out to the movie theater we both work at. My god, I hate my name, who the fuck names their kid Salvation, and that's only my first name. My full name is much worst, it's the reason a few kids picked on me in highschool, Salvation Muriel Halason. I will bet a million dollors my parents were high when they named me. Either that or my mom hated me and wanted to make me suffer a badbad life. But I think she was high, my mom and dad were both drug addicts anyways. They were such bad horrible parents. I so gald they're dead. Stupid abusive drug addicted parents.
As Ryan pulled up to our workplace, the movie theater he stopped the car and both him and me got out and headed to our places. Ryan worked selling popcorn, candy, drinks and that other stuff while I sold tickets. I hate my job its so boring. 'Uh excuse me can I have two tickets for The Invasion please' a soft voice spoke. I looked up from my messy black, red streaked hair to meet one nervous green eye the other eye covered by the boy's black and pink hair. He was wearing a pair of black pants, two chains dangling from the side & a black AFI hoodie and a pair of black fingerless gloves. He also had a lip and nose ring. He was pretty cute. There was also a girl standing beside him too. She looked about 5'5 with short shoulder lenght blue hair and blue eyes. She was wearing a black skirt with a green shirt that read 'leprechauns rule the world'. 'Of couse, that will be $12.5o' I said plastering a fake smile onto my lips. 'alright he-here' the guy said handing me a crumpled $ bill he pulled out from his pocket. 'thanks, and heres you change' I repiled the fake smile still on my lips and handed him back $7.5o 'enjoy the movie'. He took the money but didn't move his feet. He just stood there staring at me like I was the most intersting person in the world. 'Uh, are you okay, is there something on my face?' I asked him putting my left hand up to my cheek to check if there was anything on my face. Last week when I came to work Ryan decided to smear red paint on my right cheek so when I went to work people kept on laughing at me. Stupid Ryan and his stupid paint, just wait till I have revenge on him. 'Oh, no sorry I was just uh never mind I'm Ivan', he said emberessment evident in his voice 'and this is my friend Eva' Ivan said pointing his black coated fingernail at the girl standing beside him. 'Salvation' I replied with a laugh 'think we could switch names sometimes, you're name so much more normal'. 'I like you're na-name, it's ve-very uncomman and uni-unique' he repiled stuttering over his words. "hey you two up there, move you've got you're ticket so now go watch you're movie!' a guy who looked about 35 yelled to Eva and Ivan. 'hey funktard, be pat-', the girl Eva started but was cut off by Ivan 'sorry sir we're leaving right now, sorry', he whispered to the man softly then turned to me 'wellbyei'llseeyousomeothertimemaybe' Ivan talked really quickly to me before grabbing Eva's wrist and pulling her into the movie theater. 'alrighty then' i whispered quietly to myself. Gee, the kid's sure shy.
Ivan's Point Of View
I stared at the guy selling the tickets my green eyes looking directly at his was beautiful. Stop looking at him Ivan, he's going to think he's some freak that wants to get in his pants! He probely not even gay! Don't get you hopes up!. 'Uh are you okay is there something on my face' he asked me his hand rising up to his cheeks. He was so gourgeous. ''Oh, no sorry I was just uh never mind I'm Ivan' I said then pointed to Eva who was biting her red fingernails 'and this is my friend Eva'. 'Salvation' he said. God even his name is beautiful. And then with a laugh he added 'think we could switch names sometime you're name so much more normal'. I wanted to say 'you're names beautiful why would you every change it, gourgeous' but unsteed I said 'I like you're na-name, it's ve-very uncomman and uni-unique' 'Why do you keep stuttering, you sound like a bufoon. Now even if he is gay you have no chance with him you freak!' my mind told me. "hey you two up there, move you've got you're ticket so now go watch you're movie!' I heard a person yell to Eva and me so I turn my head around to face a guy who looked about 35 just as Eva yelled to him 'hey funktard, be pat-' but I cut her off before she could make too much of a scene by saying' 'sorry sir we're leaving right now, sorry'. God I'm such a pushover and a huge pussy. 'wellbyei'llseeyousomeothertimemaybe' I quickly said to the guy before grabbing Eva's wrist and heading into the movie theater and go see the movie, The Invasion. 'Well look like someones in love' Eva teased me as I pulled her up to the snack stand thingey. "Oh shut up Eve I don't like him, his face was just intersting, I was amiring his lip ring' I lied, but off course she didn't buy it but she let the subject drop when she found herself looking a guy. God, not another one. The guy was pretty cute, I guess. He had shaggy red hair and grey eyes and was wearing a pair of black pants and a shirt that read 'i do whatever my rice crispies tell me to do'. Funny. 'Can I help you two' he asked us averting his eyes to Eva 'Yeah I said I'll have skittles' I said then turned to Eva 'how about you Eva'. 'Uh, twizzlers please' she said pushing a smile onto her face and staring at the guy kinda seductivly. My God, I just had to go to this movie theater. 'Yeah alright that'll be $5.34' the guy said 'alright' I said pushing my hands into my pocket for money but before I could Eva gave him the money slipping a piece of paper into the 5 dollor bill. Probely her phone number. My god why do we have to be here, she'll probely want to talk to me about how cute the guy is. 'call me' I heard her whisper to him quietly so she could only hear him but she talked a little loundly just enough for me tohear. Then she took her twizzlers and I took my skittles and walked into the movie. Throughout most of the movie all she could talk about was the boy who she said name was 'Ryan'.
'So wanna go to the theater again tommorrow, that hot dude, Salvation I think probely be there, you can ask him out' Eva said a smile plastered onto her face She just had to bring him up! 'What he's probely not even gay' I told her taking one of her twizzlers and putting it into my mouth 'God, you're so pestimistic Ivan, I'll ask him if you want me to' She said pulling on my arm heading to her car. 'Or you could ask Hayden, he could tell what guys are guy and what guys are not' she added slipping into the car seat and starting up the car then turning onto the radio.
It's so hard to see when your eyes are rolling in the back of your head
It's even harder to speak when everything you say just comes out wrong
Gutted like a pig, all you want is the world to bleed, someone somewhere stole your desire
The pain akin to, being punched in the throat, and stabbed in the chest
'Maybe, but even if the guy is gay he probely thinks I'm a freak staring at him' I mummbled more to myself then to her playing with my fingernail. 'Nonsense, you're cute Ivan any guy in the world would be lucky to be with ya & if he doesn't go out with you I'll put a gun to his hand and thearten to shoot him if he refuses to go out with you' she joked singing along to the music loundly.
You would rather bleed than be without her It's so hard to see when your eyes are rolling in the back of your head Your bed swallows you whole as the days bleed together, torment on the lips You would rather bleed than be without her It's so hard to see when your eyes are rolling in the back of your head
Gone are the tender whispers dancing in your ears
Replaced with lackluster memories you cry, your screams play in your empty room
It's even harder to speak when everything you say just comes out wrong
Of a loved one, and if you try hard enough,
you can almost taste her, feel her pass and
Scream, OH GOD WHY ME
Gone are the tender whispers dancing in your ears
Replaced with lackluster memories you cry, your screams play in your empty room
It's even harder to speak when everything you say just comes out wrong
a/n. and thats the first chapter. short I know. i'm not much of a writer as you see but if you could reviews would be nice. tell me how i could improve my writing oh, and the song that Eva sang was Ain't Love Grand by Atreyu.