Authors note

Okay so as you all may know I wrote 10 things I want from a guy as just an getting over a guy story. So now what I wanted to announce, I am going to be submitting this short story for this contest in my state, and I wanted to get your opinions on doing that, is it a good idea? Bad Idea? I know I have to work on it a lot but I hope it wins.

Anyways just give me your honest opinions, that would be great!