A/N:- Okay I wrote this poem about 2 years ago when I was 11. So It's really old but I was convinced by a "amazing" friend aka Holly, to put it up so here it is ! ...


I walk in the shadows,

As Darkness consumes,

The path that I tred in,

onwards I walk,

life ticking by.

People scurrying.

Shutters banging.

The buzz of the city,

My nimble footsteps,

cannot be heard.

For I am alone,

walking in the shadows,

hoping to survive,

the long chilly night,

My breath visable

yet nothing else,

for I am weary

but am still alert

for the trouble,

that may cross my path tonight

as I lay limply,still thinking

Life is a baby,

hold it tight and careful

take care of it well

and hope you do fine

for my life is troubled

as I lay in the shadows,

darkness consuming

as I take my last breath

and hope that my following

shall be alright

pray to the lord

for all good he has done

as my eyes close carefully

and my heart beat stops

life may not have been good

but my heart is still full.


AN:- So there it is ... What do you think ... should I attempt a poem when I'm 13 !?

O.o well review and maybe I will, damn I just gave you a reason not to review, well review and tell me not to if you dont want me to litter FictionPress...

Rachel xxx