3I am one day hoping to get this published so any helpful criticism is much appreciated, although flames will be used to bake cookies; which will be handed out to every reviewer!
Disclaimer: I own EVERYTHING! get over it!
In the north, in the small town of Kaltag, Alaska, hazel eyes glazed over as they watched behind ebony locks at what most would call the grand show. The aura of a ram stood stubornly along side his master, awaiting the glistening lights of the aurora to dim, and for possibly something more to happen.
In the south, Brownsville Texas to be exact, blue eyes were lit up by the bright glow of the flashlight, deepening the reddish tint in the auburn colored hair. The ghost story continued as the aura of a playful fox danced around its master happily.
In the west, in Lincoln, California, unruly jet black hair flew infront of chocolate colored eyes as they gazed lovingly at the waves crashing to shore; then gently pulling bits of sand back to the rest of the ocean. The aura of a proud stallion stood erect, silently guarding his master from all seen and unseen.
East of Lincoln, in a small town called Little Oak, green eyes opened and closed lazily as shaggy brown hair shaded them slightly from the bright sun. A lone wolf's aura drifted silently around her once sleeping master.
Okay there it is! I hope it wasn't to disappointing! I'm working on the First Chapter right now!
Oh and I would also like to know what you guys think of the name! Thanks for reading!