Chapter #1:


*Rewritten! This is the new chapter that was rewritten. It has a totally different beginning :) I'm so sorry but I HAD TO :) Please understand I hope you enjoy it! XP*

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"C'mon Jace, invite your fat-I mean sister to our party this weekend. Even if you can't go at least let her go. We have a...surprise...for her! Besides there will be tons of food. Please. We all want to have fun together and you know get to know her. I bet she'll love it!" That sly little slut batted those fake eyelashes at my brother nonstop. If only I could rip them off and watch her squeal and screach in pain. Ha, I'd love that!

It was so obvious her kind of fun is: 1) Embarrassing me in front a large number of minions and those who are soon to bow down to her. 2) Making fun of my weight and appearance. 3) Calling me retarded, stupid names. 4) Forcing me do eveything and anything for her. 5) Making me feel self-concious all the time. 6) Bossing me around. 7) Dissing me every second.

And so on. But the last thing is that she would get the many blind guys that follow her biig fat ass around and then push me around. I'd accidently fall into the pool numerous times then laughed at for my klutzness. Plus I'd get locked in some room and get drenched with paint, glue, ice, water, yogurt, milk, and other expired nasty stuff.

Then I would have to hide it from my brother or else I'd get it. Ha! Of course I had to do what they say.

My brother is not exactly my ideal brother but he's okay sometimes. When he doesn't laugh at me too. Which is quite rare unless he comes home to the orphanage at the middle of the night drunk. Yeah we're orphans.

I always wanted o get outta that dump. Actually I'd like to get outta this state. Far far away from these bitches, snobs, whores, sluts, asses, and all those other bad examples of high school life in those books.

Cliches or whatever they call it. I've never believed in them. They only happen in books. Namely the romance section.

I do read them. It's just that I read all kinds of books that aren't boring like hell of course. Nobody reads that crap.

Back to current situation: Bitchy slut called Angie trying to seduce my brother and try to get me to go to their party for they have a surprise in stored for me and only me.

Oh wow. I'm SO excited. Note sarcasm.

"Can't." Jace shrugged it off.

Angie didn't look happy. Instead her expression turned to one of disappointment. "Why not?!" Great here comes her so called 'Pretty Pout'.

Barf. Barf again. She's gorgeous but it's not how she was born. Her parents are so rich she nearly fixed everything she has.

"Cuz I can't and that means she can't either."

Angie pouted again. Angry she turned her big surgically fixed ass and boobs to her friends. I bet they're trying to think of a plan to get me there. And change Jace's mind of not going.

I can't believe this though. Jace had always been the most popluar in the whole school. Even though they all know that we're orphans I'm made fun of but not him. I mean they do know we're siblings! I wonder what this should be called...Hmm maybe hotpopfatcastism! I don't know. A mix of hot popular and fat outcast. And -ism at the end. Perfecto!

Hahaha. Not.

Guess I had been doing this whole time? Sitting there and listening to every word that spilled out of their mouths. I always do that. Ever since middle school. I have no opinion whatsoever. They didn't even like me so why bother dragging me over to their table all the time? Because I'm Jace's sister and they have nothing better or smarter to do.

To be honest we look nothing alike even though we're siblings. I'm 5'6 and Jace is like 6'1. Jace has silky short brown hair with red highlights and beautiful green eyes. Me? I had boring ugly short black hair and a pair of ugly boring dark brown eyes. Apparently our mom was half Caucassion and half Japanese and dad was half Asian American and half Caucassion. Very weird right? I know! That's why I'm more on the Asian side and Jace is more on the Caucassion side. At least we were told that by the people at the orphanage.

I still cant believe it! It's just...too weird. I just wish I could confirm it if our parents were still alive. They died in an accident when I was just 2 months old and Jace about a year and a half old. We barely knew them but Jace said he remembered they were very caring and kind people. He's probably making it up to make me feel better...

Oh and the last things that are different about us. Jace was very well built but not the too much muscles kind. Just enough to look good. He was popular and had many girlfriends while I had no boyfriend and not even my first kiss. I'm the fat, ugly outcast and loner. I had friends when I was in preschool but I was practically alone during the very start of elementary school. I am a 170 lb. girl that just turned fourteen a few months ago. How's that fat and ugly for you?

You'd say extremely fat and ugly so I go ding ding ding! Your correct! Here's a piece of fat, oily meat I saved under my bed for you! Here you go!

Then I pull it outta my shirt and put it in your face. Lastly you barf on me and I'd eat your barf and say yummy!

Hahaha. So funny. Not.

Gawd I hate my fucking life! Only thing that's just a little bit good is the fact that I get to sit in the same table as my first crush every day. He's what you call the second popular guy and best friend of my brother. Too bad this isn't a book where I end up dating him. He probably doesn't know I exist. He probably doesn't even care if I exist.

I ugly, fat, not the smartest, a loner, an outcast, boring, weird, a nobody, a fatty, pig, have bad taste, dress badly, stinks, hairy, not pretty, not special, and all that crap people always sayb about me when I'm standing RIGHT THERE!

Can't they just leave me alone?

No is the answer.

If only some family would adopt us and we had to move to a distant place.

Not happening. EVER.

Now Angie was done and she had a plan alright. "Jace if you can't come can you at least tell me why?" Jace stared at her for a second and was about to say no when she lenaed in and fiddled with his hair, rubbed his chest (AW NASTY! PUKE.), and gave him a perfectly clear view of what was inside her tank top.

Since he's a guy and all he couldn't resist the temptation. Puke. Why the hell do guys have to be perverted and XXX crazed?! Pigs...

Just makes you wanna punch them in the face and kick them in the nuts. That's would help those girls who guys said they would never date or kiss or do it with and blah blah blah. Example A: Me.

Jace kept staring at her damn boobs! Gawd snap out of it! It's all fake and what's the point! I had an urge to say that but it wouldn't be a good idea. It would be the worst thing to do actually.

"Well...I wasn't going to but since you asked me..it's okay." His eyes are gonna go blind if they go any lower.

Unconciously I was glaring and rolling my eyes at those two. "I feel the same way. It's so annoying." A voice suddenly whispered and chuckled a little. It was a guy's voice and it came from a couple of chairs unoccupied chair away from me.

Shocked and surprised that somebody had caught me I immediately glanced over to see who it was...

There before my eyes was my crush, Darius, staring back at me with interesting eyes.

Uh oh. What do I do? Should I try talking to him? Okay then. Here goes everything.

"...Yeah...Totally..." Darius's wide eyes widened even more after I spoke.

"What?" I asked gazing at him dreaming of the day of our wedding. Just kidding. I don't dream of things that are never possible and I mean NEVER POSSIBLE.

Even though he never bullies me I know it's probably cuz of Jace but he's still one of the jocks and part of the popular people.

Darius chuckled slightly and shook his head. "Nothing. It's just that I've never heard you talk and...well I just found it...really soft..and cute." he smiled brightly towards me.

I don't know if I should be offended or something...

I don't think I should. I mean he complimented me and that's why I'm blushing madly at him. "...Thanks...?" It somehow ended up sounding like a question.

Gawd! At that very moment I wanted to slap myself for sounding so-so-so..so-so...ugh! So bitchy or annoyed or whatever!

Gah!

Luckily Darius just smiled and turned away after saying, "You're welcome, Mishelle-I mean Misha." He laughed.

By the time he was back to talking to his friends my face was flushed.

Totally, really, super, extremely, very flush red!

He does knoe my name after all! And he called me Misha...Oh my gawd!

Wait he probably heard it from Jace. Misha is what my friends that I still had used to call me. It's technically my nickname. Jace doesn't use it to hurt me he just thinks it fits me? Okay weird.

And he also said it was cute. Haha, he can be a good brother sometimes.

Sometimes...But did he tell Darius that he called me Misha?

Maybe I should try asking him...

Nope! Never gonna happen. It'll just make my life even worse and even more miserable.

And I am not gonna be happy with that. I'm already unhappy and hateful.

Enough of me blabbing to you. I have better things to do like gape at what is now the best day of my entire life!

I wonder if it'll happen again...I'd like to wait and see but..is it worth all the other bad things...

I'm not sure but I bet I'll find out sooner or later.

Most likely sooner...

Oh no.


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I am so very very very sorry but I just HAD to rewrite this chapter :) Please understand. I'm especially sorry to the two who have reviewed the bad chapter :( I'm really really sorry but this one will be much much much better X3 I promise XD So I hope you liked it XP

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What do you think of Misha?

What do you think of Jace?

What do you think of Angie? (shell be gone soon but i wanted people to hate her cuz i hate people like that too XP)

What do you think of Darius?

Should Darius stay?

Any suggestions for future ideas and developments of the story?

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