Ok guys. After reading over this story, I realize that the plot itself has a bit of promise, but the style is almost nothing like my style is now. Of course, why would it be? I wrote this thing years ago. So, I was just wondering. How would you guys feel if I re-wrote this story? It would have the same characters, same general plot line, but most likely be a whole hell of a lot longer and more detailed.
So, what do you say?
Please leave a review with your opinions.