1This is rated M for a reason. There's a bit of gore. Which is why it's in horror. I like to curse too. This is my first story so some constructive criticism is appreciated.
The girl had on black clothing that matched her ebony hair. Bright blue lipstick drew your eyes to the splash of color. Neon green highlights were visible only when she moved.
She was talking to a young guy, probably just reached his 20's. Black hair and dark brown eyes faced the girl he had labeled as the cyber goth the first time he had met her. He knew now that she wouldn't have liked to know he had labeled her that, she despises labels.
Cyber goth girl smiled at him, she had been flirting with him for the past 20 minutes. He awarded her efforts with a grin. Her skin began to stretch around her mouth, and he just wondered if it hurt her to smile that much. He noticed her eyes alight with a mischievous touch as the skin began to rip.
He pointed to it and was about to tell her her skin had broke or some other lame line when he heard her jaw break.
The skin on her face stretched even more, it seemed she was showing off her jaw to him. His noteworthy sparkling grin had transformed into a gaping hole of horror, his face shocked as her teeth became long and pointed like a saber tooth tiger. Although her new set of teeth seemed sharper to him.
The strain on her jaw finally broke, her old skin falling from her broken jaw as she screamed, and she was free from her jail of a body.