A.N.: This is a brand-new poem, and very rough…I would love some advice/criticism! Also, I betcha can't figure out what it's actually about~

She glides over the dust

Seeking, on occasion

In vain

Spirit of discovery

She trudges on,

Climbing obstacles


Spirit of perseverance

She settles down

Not resting, but


Spirit of patience

She treks on,

Alone in a land

So foreign

Spirit of independence

There will come a day

That her support will be gone

Still, she journeys on

Spirit of courage