Hey everyone,

I've decided to remove this story because I'm not at all happy with. I heart Zachary, but the story isn't going to way I want it and I don't really find it interesting. I need to rework it, add a bit more drama, and move the action up.

That's been a general problem in all my stories. I take too long to get to the point. Maybe I SHOULD start outlining. I'm taking an Advanced Fiction Writing class this semester and I'm learning a lot which I'm hoping to incorporate into my writing.

Anyway, after I rework THS I may re-post it.

Thank you everyone who put this on their alert list or favorites. I really appreciate it and I'm glad you like the characters. Actually, if there's anything you have to say, about where you thought the story was heading or should go let me know!

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Again, thank you!

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